My heart broke for the person in this story. All they wanted was a letter of love. That's not too much to ask. This was a wonderful, though heart-wrenching poem. Well done! Keep on writing!
A lawn mower? I'm so stunned, I have to ask it twice! A lawn mower? Laughing out loud! I'd say he bought it for himself, not for her! Yes the best get back is the sewing machine. We all have those Christmases where we have no clue what to buy folk, that's where gift certificates and cards come in handy. Give 'em the money and let them buy what ever they want themsleves! Great job! Keep on writing!
This was an excellent story! Not only did you get a good buy on a tree, you got in some reminiscing too. Plus a lift home and a new car! It's not every day this happens. I'd say everything that happened was a chain reaction. A good chain reaction! Keep up the good work! Write on!
This is a great opening chapter to this story. It has just enough mystery to lead the reader on to the next chapter. Why is Isobel running away? Why does she not want to go home? Why was she willing to risk traveling in a horse trailer? These are some of the questions that popped up in my mind while reading this story. Yes, I would like to see more. Isobel has me intrigued. Keep on writing!
This is a great story! I enjoyed the back room wheeling and dealing. Just like in politics, anything goes in order to gain a profit! Even if it cost lives and the lawsuits pour in from all directions. Imagine the audacity to advertise the Nova as the perfect car for "the adventurer"! But, the consumer won in the end! Yay! Keep on writing
This was a very sad story, with an even sadder ending. Unfortunately Kristen's life was profoundly affected by bad decisons made by both her father and mother. Her father leaving her, and her mother sleeping around. To add insult to injury her mother has a boyfriend that not only hit her, but hit Kristen. Plus Kristen wasn't accepted at school. She felt totally left out, with no one to love her, so she took what she thought was the only way out. Keep on writing!
I was glad to answer this poll because I do blog! As a matter of fact, I think I blog too much. But, I do enjoy blogging. I hope that what I write will be hepful to to ohers who may be experiencing the same things that I am. I've also managed to meet and make a couple friends because of my blog. That's a wonderful byproduct that I did not expect, and love.
Finally! A story writen according to the dog's point of view! I loved it. Especailly finding out a rottweiler can type on the computer! I can just picture that! Just wait until the owners find out! Perhaps he will get his own laptop. That way he can type as much as he wants without having to worry about messing up someone else's computer. Great story! Keep up the good work and please write some more about Mac! I loved reading his take on things!
This beginning chapter was excellent! You did a great job in describing Rona's charactor. The history of her childhood is essental to how she made it into FORW. I also enjoyed learing about her mentor/foster father. He was very instrumental in helping her in that area, since he was a former member. Great Job! Keep on writing!
This story made me laugh out loud! I just see Data doing this! Blame it on discovering his humanity indeed! He's just havin' fun! Great job! Keep on wriitng!
People watching is fun! They have no idea how they look in the eyes of others, are totally oblivious, and even more don't care. You can get rare glimpes into others lives by just watching. This story was great! Keep on writing!
A very disturbing, but well writen tale! I would've like to know more about the subject, but that would've spoiled the point you're trying to establish. Great job! Keep on writing!
The first eight words of this story really grabbed me. I can personally identify with them! And yes, the rest of this story really hit a nerve. This was an excellent story! Keep on writing!
Excellent! I really needed this reminder! It's so easy to get distracted and wander off the "straight path" that has been set for us. Focus on Him, that is the key! Keep on writing!
This was an excellent story! I can see the empty nest syndrome about to set in. Now that I've sen it from the mother's viewpoint, I would love to see it from the son's viewpoint. I'm sure he has the same wonderful and meaningful memories of growing up with Mom. Keep on writing!
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