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Review of NOSTALOGIA  
Review by Storiable
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is wonderful, you really have great writing skills! Especially its theme was very close to my own interests, because I am that kind of person who easily gets stuck in the past and doesn't know how to live in the moment. So your poem really described these feelings and problems that I sometimes have.

I personally prefer headings that aren't completely written with capital letters (Caps Lock) because I find them somehow aggressive.
But that's of course only my opinion! I can't call that an advice and I'm also a newbie so I'm just saying :)

Keep writing, best wishes

Storiable
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Review by Storiable
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really loved this poem, especially the ending is very touching. So very well done, keep writing because you do have a talent!

In some parts I was though a bit confused, for example who is meant as we but one reason for that
is probably the fact that I'm a newbie and I don't have so much reviewing experience :)

Best wishes,

Storiable
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