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Review of Lonely  
Review by Ethanael
Rated: E | (5.0)
Incredibly touching! Kind of odd how friendships work out sometimes, isn't it? I find myself locking onto one good friend and eventually, after a few years pass by, so does the friendship. It hurts and I definitely felt it through this well written poem.

Pro's - "Wow! That was great!"
Emotionally Impacting
Well written, grammer, punctuation
Good length

Con's - "Hmm, something's missing."
Well, it's a poem, and it was well written in my eyes. Unfortunally, I can't justify putting anything down that I didn't like.

Overall
Keep up the great work! You obviously know, very well, how to put your emotion into writing. This sort of talent isn't easily learnt. Normally, emotion builds upon several life long experiences/conflicts that eventually blows out into anger, depression or just simply writing, that allows a person to get it off of their chest.

Great work!
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