Your poll is succinct and to the point with no confusion over exactly what you are asking.
However, It would be very interesting if you gave some reasoning behind why you are asking the question. Is it a subject that you feel particularly strongly about? Perhaps it is something that you can directly relate to in life.
Absolutley brilliant idea for a pole. I really hope that this gets WDC members thinking not only about the reviews they receive but also those that they give.
You use the writingML emote wonderfully to emphasis your words in your second paragraph and the use of colour livens everything up nicely.
It's lovely to see someone putting so much effort in to a poll. I often get the impression that most of them have been banged out without a thought for presentation.
Personally I like a review that incorporates several of the points in your poll. When giving serious reviews I like to offer my overall impressions before stating things I really liked then points that I feel could use improving. I think it's also nice to add another sentence or two of encouragement at the end, especially if I have found a lot of errors.
I don't have the technical knowledge of haikus to know if yours falls in to the correct technical form, but I enjoyed the piece a lot and found it very effectual.
You manage to say so much with so little little words, conveying both visual and emotional impact.
I liked the word order you chose in the first line, placing cut next to rose, rather than cut red rose. It gave me the feeling that the rose was bleeding and whilst the vase is described as endless you know that the rose will soon die. This was emphasised by the description of the petals falling as tears, although this is quite a common metaphor.
On a side note, your item description was as beautiful as the piece itself.
Please carry on writing pieces as touching as this.
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You use the writingML emote wonderfully to emphasis your words in your second paragraph and the use of colour livens everything up nicely.
It's lovely to see someone putting so much effort in to a poll. I often get the impression that most of them have been banged out without a thought for presentation.