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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (4.0)
I too am starting to plan ahead. Though, I was interested by the title, but it doesn't match up with the content. The title makes think that you are writing from the perspective that you are in college and that you are telling of your experiences when you are actually talking about what you hope it will be like once you get there. With that aside, I would have liked more detail in what your looking for. I too have the same hopes but to make yours original, you have to express them in your own special way. More description, and you will be a great writer. Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Sarah and Shylock  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (4.0)
i wish you would finish. I see real potential in this piece.
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Review of Just a Poem  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
i understand what its like to be bored in class. Actually, as we speak i am droning out during American History homework
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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (4.0)
i am sorry for your loss
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Review of Memories Can Hurt  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
that was very emotional and only in a little tidbit of a memory. it was amazing. did he ever go to the hospital though?
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Review of I Am Who I Am  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
couldn't have said it better myself.
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Review of My Bacon  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
gosh darn, now you have made me hungry.
FOR BACON!!!!!!
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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
friendship is magic
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Review of Beauty  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
awwwwww! thanks!
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Review of Thank You!  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (3.5)
it wasn't me but if i knew you, i probably would do that too.
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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
that was heart touching. i am crying right now.
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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (4.5)
that is sooo sad!
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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
LaLaLa, i need to hear from you more. keep writing and i swear that you will the next Robert Frost.
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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
you forgot "amen"
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Review of Fiercely  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (4.0)
this literaly explains what my two friends are going through right now. Except they dont seem to realize that the other's crush is on them. Don't you just love middle school?
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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the ending how you added the broken toe bit. It adds a little bit of a comic relief for me.
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Review of Forget Me  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
wow, i never really thought about that.
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Review of funny limerick  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am literaly dying of laughter!!!!!
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Review of Inside Not Out  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm not even in high school yet and the same things have happened to me too.
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Review of What can you do  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (3.5)
amen
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Review of To Father  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand 100% what you are going through. I actually wrote something similar to my dad a while back. I never gave it to him though.
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Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (3.5)
very good
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Review of Confused  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
wow...
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Review of Pain of the Heart  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
The world needs to here that more often
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Review of Depression  
Review by Fiona Read
Rated: E | (5.0)
I've been there too
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