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Review of I am not me.  
Review by Gamergirl
Rated: E | (3.5)
Ok, so somehow you managed to make me teary eyed.

Good job with bringing the emotion out in people. I am sure I am not the only one that this poem had this effect on them,
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Review by Gamergirl
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Demons without an element are very advanced in culture. They have developed highly advanced technology to cope with the harsh world surrounding them. They are substantially weaker than all other demons, and rely solely on their advanced intelligence to protect them

I Find this extremely true
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Review by Gamergirl
Rated: E | (1.0)
1. 3 boxes:
This is a straightforward but hypothetical competition where you can win hypothetical money: 1. There are three sealed boxes, one of which has $10,000 inside. The other two are empty. 2. You are asked to choose a box. 3. The Quizmaster then opens one of the other boxes. It is empty. 4. You are then given the option of changing your choice to the other unopened box. Question: Is it to your advantage to change boxes? ('Yes' or 'No') See, I said it was simple! What is difficult is the rationale for your answer.





WTF you dont get a choice or did i do this wrong
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Review by Gamergirl
Rated: E | (5.0)
She had no doubts.

Her answer was never heard.

The end came so fast, there was no time for pain or tears.

It was an explosion that lit up the sky. The remains of the balloon was a rainbow of flaming colors.



This is one of the more heart wrenching endings ever.
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Review by Gamergirl
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my! This is really good there are some grammar and spelling issues. Other than that great story. You could make the flash back more defined. At first i didn't understand it until i reread it.

~gamergirl1995. I love your writing this is an amazing story.
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Review by Gamergirl
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh my! This is really good there are some grammar and spelling issues. Other than that great story. You could make the flash back more defined. At first i didn't understand it until i reread it.

~gamergirl1995
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