i really like this one on a personal level, i left my husband not too long ago and while i wasnt set out looking for someone else, i just wanted to be held.
this is unique differrent style of poetry. simple, to the point. i think u would do good with style poetry where you are challanged to fit your ideas ina certain pattern.
honestly, i didnt gather the memory she had, or what it even may have been. but i remember one time picking blackberries and a snake running across my foot. i was six, but ran to the car and locked the door before my blackberry bowl ever hit the ground. after reading it i can see maybe this was her way of making money and not somethig she enjoyed. where as i was happy and excited to pick blackberries for a summer treat. odd how the same activity can be so different for two people.
hi, i just discovered i had this also, same exact experiances you had. i even wrote poems about it also, about shadows in the night, demons, my soul being trapped. i could hear and see everything around me as it was in real life, but the shadow was there, couldnt move, speak, scream, nothing. and deathly scared to go back to sleep afterwards iin fear of not coming out of it. i feel a large amount of pressure in my head that scared me, i thought if i didnt come out of it soon my head would just explode or something. very scary experiance, will drive you crazy if you dont recognize it.
ok, my name is ashley, im 23 years old, and read the letter to your children. had to stop and write this before i read the poem. and find some tissue cause im balling. i left my husband last january due to a very abusive realtionship, we have two children together. i had to leave them behind...i had no where to go. i could live in my car but my children couldn't and i knew they were safe. so after i got back on my feet, job and home, they came back to me. this is in the course of three months. at the end of may after learning i wasnt taking him back ever, he filed false charges on me with a restraining order, and got away with it because he involved the children. i went to jail unitl proven innocent, loosing my job and home and all i had worked for up to that point. so he was immediatley able to file for custody because i had nothing for my children-thanks to him. im going to read your poem now and probably send another message afterwards. just wanted to share that with you.
with a stun! oh what fun!...
they really shoulda run....
not really a good word choice, but it ryhmes. i like the way you pick a theme and are limited to creativity and challanaged to come up with words and make it make sense. i think im gonna try this also...
I really like the way this is written, a message in disguise. i think its what i think people think of me after meeting me. funny how a short conversation can reveal all this about someone.
i've just registered with writers.com and already got the word out threw my facebook, myspace, and told several of my friends, i really think they'll enjoy this site also. i can't wait to afford a membership so that i can do more. i wish there was a way to just copy and paste this link everywhere.
i really like this, not a victim of secret alcholic husband tho- more like secret wife beater. i really like how its an expression of your thoughts. thats how i write also.
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