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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello eskay
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Notes on an Old Diary.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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Diaries. What an interesting thing to write about. They do hold alot of secrets and they have a lot to tell. I scanned your port and I can see that you are a poet and you shine gracefully when it comes to philosophy.

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I felt that you described the diary very well in the first stanza that I felt myself living around a diary and imagining how it would be if I found an old diary that I wrote before.
I know that diaries will remain for others to read, just as you pointed out and I can't agree more with you there.

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I have a mere suggestion regarding a part that didn't seem very clear to me which is "The space filled with them blank, yet no room." I felt that it was as if the diary wasn't a real thing. I was puzzled here. I think you may want to add a bit of explanation here.


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello Jim
I am gladiola and I am scared to review a moderator. lol

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A poem centered around numbers and using a different poem format for each number. This is a creative and a challenging thing to write. I know that it wasn't easy to do but I am so proud of you that you succeeded to do it.

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I like this collection of poems and the different themes in each poem. I love the different stories there, different genres, some comic, some romance, this variety creates beauty and you can have a wide audience of readers to this piece of art.

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I love the comic verse about number nine and the verse that is dedicated to me. *Smile*

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I am not professional in poetry but I believe this certainly deserves a 5 star rating.



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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello NayNizzy.
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Impossibly Possible.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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The possible and the impossible. I guess that is a very philosophical thing to write about and it really makes me wonder alot. I wonder if older people have found answers to all their questions or not yet. That is a real important thing to write about and I guess you will have large audience to that piece.

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I think your poem is an outstanding one. You mention that one may feel things are impossible but in your imagination the sky is the limit. I love how you discussed a very complicated issue in a smooth way that it looked so simple and straight to the point.

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I loved several parts in your poem for they have affected me personally and I have either experienced or wish to experience them

Sometimes answers to questions.
are hidden in the simplest of places.
It is just a matter of you being willing,
Willing to accept what your mind is telling you.
This stanza raises my hope alot. I love how you urge the reader to accept challenges and go for what they believe in.

Just remember,
not every questions has a correct answer.
Not every hour of your life has to make sense,
and not every dream has to stay a dream.
I love these reminders because I agree that one must not have a correct answer since we learn by making mistakes. I agree that some time can be nonsense and yes dreams don't have to stay unachieved.
This last stanza is rather a quote that is worth memorizing.

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I guess your poem is perfect and I would like to come check your port once in a while to read what you have to say.


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William Wordsworth



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Review of Lovesong  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello David Cooke
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Lovesong.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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A lovesong. It is so beautiful to talk about love and write a song for it. It is very sweet to see how everyone sees his beloved person.

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

That poem is an amazing piece of art. I believed it and I could feel how romantic it sounds. I could see a man who probably ran out of ordered words but he wanted to tell his beloved lady how he felt towards her without arranging his words or making them rhyme.

*ThumbsUp*What I liked most *ThumbsUp*

I loved the final promise that he will always think of her. That is commitmen and every successful relationship needs that.
My favourite line is "My angel without wings. My perfect melody " That is a great description.

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Perfect.

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Nothing for this.


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Review of Vlad's Wife  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello April Desiree-I'm back!
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled Vlad's Wife.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

I enjoyed reading that historical story. I didn't really know well about that transformation of Turkey, how it was and what it became and the stages it passed through, but your story gave me a hint of what things were like. I liked the threats there and the ego of that wife who preferred to die free rather than live as a slave even if it was temporarily.
The story is easily written.
Though I guess that the reader would need to have a background about the period of time you discussed in order to fully get your story and feel it.

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Perfect.

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I guess that more details would make the story easier to understand, and give it a stronger impact. I wanted to know exactly what was written in the note, where was her husband, and which river did she jump into?


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

Hello dejavu_BIG computerprobs
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled Rules Of The Street.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

I have been reading this story for the title and the brief description drew me in. I wanted to know what those rules were.

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

That story is a one which could really reflect the life of one of those who were raised on the streets, who know nothing but murder, drugs and alcohol. I guess you clearly described their days, their morals and their behaviour. It isn't easy to describe that but I really enjoyed the picture that you created in my mind.

*ThumbsUp*What I liked most *ThumbsUp*

I loved the good memory he had for his grandma, and how he wanted to make her proud of him. I loved the hint you gave as of why he has been lying there. That is a good flashback. You used clean language and I respect that.

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That was finely written.

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I guess you did a great job here and so I can't think of an improvement to make.


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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello winklett in the woods
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled The Rat Race (or The Art of Losing).
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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An essay that caused you to be fired from a job that you hated. This sounds funny and bad at the same time. I was so excited since I wrote the title and the brief description to know what you have to say and your experience there. I knew there is much fun to share.

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This is hilarious. I enjoyed imaginning the different rat groups and how each category was treated. I could imagine those irresponsible "scientists" going for the so called "meetings" every now and then. I felt I loved the end when the race proved to be a failure and their genius abilities turned out to lack logic. FOFL
I loved how rats got fed up with them and how they wanted their lives as free rats, not as a part of scientific experiments. It is really a pity using animals in experiments, I mean it is a dilemma, it is good to find out results but some violate animal rights. I donno.

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I loved the words "art of losing". Is there really an art of losing that exists? Anyway it was so funny because not only the rats were losing the race but the scientists were losing success that they expected from their nonsense experiment. I enjoyed that so much. That is very funny.


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I didn't stumble anywhere, maybe I was among the lazy rats that stood at the starting point all the time.lol

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I guess this is just perfect and I wanna wish you a happy new year here on WDC and a very happy 2012. I hope you write a lot this year and keep up the creative and funny work.


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Review of Adnexa  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello dogwood212
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled Adnexa.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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A little girl growing up who is warned that she might be taken to the circus. This is odd but creative because yeah kids and even grown ups love going to the circus, so why is that a threat to her.

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This story is a dark and strange one. I could feel how it was started with Adnexa's nightmare and how she was imprisoned at home in the dark all her life. I felt I could feel how she wished she would ever be surrounded by poeple coming and gathering. I couldn't imagine how a young kid could be that lonely and living in the dark. I think it is still a work in progress and I believe it will be a distinguished one.

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However I guess this is only the beginning of a longer stpry or perhaps a novel because the questions raised in the reader's mind remain unanswered. The story doesn't even resolve at the end but it adds another question.


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Review of Our Pet Spider  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Pico ヨハネス
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled Our Pet Spider.

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Wow I love stories about children which their strange wishes. The title said it all. OMG A pet spider. This is a little creepy but it must be interesting to read. I must admit that you are the first to write about raising such a beautiful pet so that you can have a great audience to this one of a kind piece. LOL

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I can't express how much I loved this story. I couldn't believe myself when I read how you approved of the behaviour of the mother spider, she must have been a role models to all spider mothers. It is a loss that she has passed away. Lol
Your story is a humourous one that makes the reader think about it and interact with it. I can imagine how the kid wanted it so much and how it is hard to convince a child that it isn't suitable. I loved your final excuse that pets were not allowed.

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*Ornament4R* I loved many things about this story, I loved that Sony 1 was replaced by Sony 2.
*Ornament4R* I loved how the kid cared so much for his spider and really managed to take it with him to the new home. I loved how he kept encouraging it to keep strong.

*Ornament4R* What I really loved most is that you were not mean with the child and you agreed to accept what he wanted. I know that it was disgusting to keep a spider but it isn't a dangerous thing to do either. This is so kind of you to do what the child wished for even though it was peculiar enough.*Ornament4R*

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I really loved reading it. I just wish to be sure if it is a real story. It is in the category of experience but I would recommend that you write whether it is true or fiction.
If it is true, I would love to know whether you are his mum or dad because parents act in a different ways in such things. Anyway the story shows a real kind and good side. Great one.

Happy holiday and happy new year here on WDC and 2012.


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William Wordsworth



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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello BScholl
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled A Note on Flash Stories.

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Notes on flash fiction. This is neccessary because flash fiction sound easier than they really are. they are challenging and can be either amazing or lousy pieces. They are definitely worth discussing. Hats off to you for choosing to write about flash fiction.

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I think you did these stories justice. You mentioned many things which are vital to each story. I couldn't agree more with the need to use certain vocabulary and probably advanced level of English because you don't have a space to chat and you need the perfect word in the perfect place. I also think that it needs practicing because yeah it is hard to write. I think flash fiction sounds easy when read but it definitely takes a lot of creativity and skills to write. Great notes.

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I am not suggesting anything because I think you said more than what I even knew and I just wish you a happy new year 2012 and a creative year here on WDC. Merry Christmas and happy holiday. *Santahat*


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello mars
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your entry entitled Bad things I did as a kid.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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List of bad things you committed when you were a kid. I was definitely curious to know what you did. They must be funny and embarressing. Thank you for sharing them with me.

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It is amusing to read because although they are wrong things but a child can be naught and funny and deep in his heart he means no harm and no evil. I am not saying it is okay but I mean that mistakes done by children and so much better and less serious than those done by grown ups!
I really didn't do any of the stuff you mentioned and my parents all believe I am the worst. Sighs!
Anyway, this is courageous to write and enjoying to read. It is also organized and visually appealing.

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I just wish you a great new year on WDC with fingers flying on your keyboard. Have a happy holiday!


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Review of Helping Santa  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Jim
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Helping Santa.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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Helping Santa. Does he need help? wow

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I enjoyed reading this for different reasons. It is a unique poem where it happens between you (yourself) and Santa. I loved how you imagined yourself to be part of the event. Tis is creative and actually honest. You were the helping one which you always are so i wasn't amazed by your role.

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I loved the ending were Santa tricked Jim (my friend) and made him think there were no gifts for him but was just giving him the best gift he would ever wish. This is just rewarding, creative and fair. I loved it and would really wsh that oneday you publish your own book and see it there with your name on it.

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Merry Christmas dear!


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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello Karl
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled "My Christmas Gift" Revised.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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Gifting Jesus a gift for his birthday. What an idea! I am curious to know what you will give him.

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I think you did a marvelous job. You kept thinking of what you should give him, you wanted a valuable thing but you know that no matter how expensive, still you need a greater thing and finally you decided to give him your heart. This is the best gift.

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You've guarded and directed me
throughout each year.
Every time I've had a problem
You lent me an ear.
This is perfect. I long for this blessing.


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Merry Christmas to you.


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Review of Tasha's Thoughts  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello iluvhorses
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled Tasha's Thoughts.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Congratulations on your promotion.

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Observing a dog and knowing what it thinks. I chose to read this for I adore animals and I know what they think. I can understand them very well once I look at them and so it is interesting for me to know about your Tasha.

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I enjoyed reading it. You have an outstanding ability to describe with details your dog, her look and attitude. I could imagine how the dog reacted to music and how it chased the other dog. I could feel how innocent and playful they both are. You managed to deliver the image you see to the reader.

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I like the fine description of the dog's facial features.

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I think it is just perfect. I loved Tasha,too. *Smile*


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Review of NON EXISTENT LOVE  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: E | (4.0)


Hello Sinem
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled NON EXISTENT LOVE.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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Non existent love. I guess you are right. In this hectic life and progessed technology, we seem to have lacked love and mercy. We are intolerant to each other and we never learn from the consequences.

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I like your poem because it is easy to understand. It is straight forward and clear. You emphasized the words you needed to say out loud that I felt I could see you reciting your poem. You did a great job.

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The title seemed perfect and suited the entire poem. Good choice.

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LOVEIn humanities"human" heart. I am not sure about it but I guess that you mean the human heart, humanities sounded to be a bit awkward.
Also you need to leave a spacke between love and in.


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Review of Color Kitty  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Twoshadows
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your short story entitled Color Kitty.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.
I chose to read this because I adors kitties and I love fantasy. The brief description drew me in and made me curious to read the story.

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A cat with two unique characters is offered to become a lady to join the lonely man she love. This is a jem of an idea. I wonder how you came up with a story like this one. It is a keeper. It is original and I guess you will have a huge audience for this. Believe in yourself, even if it is not yet noticed, you shouldn't give up. You are doing a great job.

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Wow. This story is definitely a one to be remembered. I can feel that it suits to be a film which would succed alot. It is full of many valuable lessons about life. " In order to win something, you should sacrifice another. You can't have all things."
"Everyone needs someone to be with. Being lonely is so hard and painful."
I just recommend that you give it a quick revision, where the story is told and it may need to be a bit shown. Show not tell. This is not a rule and I, myself, is not good in doing this, but it helps the story to have more readers and better ratings.
I guess repetition of going to the porch and out throughout the story can be eliminated. Remember to leave one space after a comma and two spaces after a period.



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I loved Tammie's ability to change colours according to how she felt and where she was.
I loved how she was uncomfortable in her gender. It is funny to have cats with sexual issues.
I loved how the man and tha cat found good company together.
I loved the happy ending.


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He watched as she jumped off her(his , the man's lap) lap and went to the door.


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Well I guess the story needs a bit of formatting. You need to leave spaces between paragraphs to make it easier to read. You should just click enter when you feel you need a space.
Also the lines separating different parts of the story need to be in the middle of the line. I recommend that you click enter so that the separation between the different parts becomes clearer.
When Tammie wanted to keep her purring, I thought that she would not be able to speak. I don't know but I just wished to say that I didn't expect that to come.

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Review of How I Became Sum1  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Sum1
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled How I Became Sum1.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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The origin of your handle. This is interesting to read because each one has a story behind the name he loves to keep. It is us who choose our pen names here and so it is definitely what we love to be called.

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This is simple and fun to read. I loved your sense of humor starting from the prehistoric origin of your handle and right down till your family names. It is hilarious to read and I liked it. I just don't really feel why you need to remind yourself you are not numero uno, I don't think you tend to be arrogant.

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Nobody is so funny. lol



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Review of Love Like That  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

Hello Uzbekistan
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Love Like That.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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I enjoyed reading it and imaginning the different love stories here, the old couple that were watching a movie, the children that didn't care about those looking at them. I felt that it was so romantic with a lot of clear and beautful imagery full of graceful motion. I loved that!

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My favorite lines are
When your love is with your best friend
I guess that’s the love with no end
I believe this is true. It is how love should be like.


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I think you need to focus here on either the poem construction or the brief description. I guess one of them is not clear enough. The poem is not just about loving someone and not telling, but you mentioned different stories of lovers. I wish you would give that some more time and effort. You may just need to change the brief description so that it includes these different stories.


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hello Princess Megan Rose 22 Years
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled The Animals and Christmas.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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Animals talking about Christmas. How nice! I love both Christmas and animals and so this combination seems so right to me. I have never read such a thing before and you managed to write about it in a different and charming manner. Well done!

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This is stunning. If there was a rating, I would have given it 5 star rating straight away. I loved the imagery there with the different animals talking. I enjoyed reading it and I wish there were more animals speaking.

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I fell in love with the donkey that was very proud of her ancestor who gave Virgin Mary a ride. It is incredible!


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Review of Memories  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello The Northern Optimist
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Memories.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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A poem about memories of a son who has passed away. This is really very sad and one of the worst experiences anyone can ever have.

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The poem is a nice one. I like reading it as it flowed smoothly and I could feel the contrast between the upper part where joy and motion were and the lower part where the parent is sorry for his loss. I could feel how lonely he felt and how much he missed his own child and wished he could hug him one more time. it is honest and simple, yet rich in emotions.

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If I were you, I would leave it untouched.


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Review of One Scary Night  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello Jim
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled One Scary Night.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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A young boy getting lost on Halloween. Wow! I always love Halloween stories, specifically when it is about a young child.

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I read that first and had few questions, but when i read it again, I found all the answers. I really loved how the story flowed and how everything resolved at the end. I could actually see and feel alot here. I saw this child alone in the darkness feeling insecure in such a time. I love fears of children which are as innocent just as they are. Cool!

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I loved how his mum assured him that she was there for him, watching him closely to be sure that he was okay. I loved that comforting feeling to have someone who cares for you and is there to protect you whenever you need. It is priceless.

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But that’s how it is when you’re only five
His friends were a bit older, Steve was nine
these two lines didn't rhyme but I can't think of a better choice here. I am sorry.


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Review of Eye Contact  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello The Northern Optimist
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Eye Contact.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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Two lovers having their first eye contact. A lot of stories have always discussed this. It is always fun, surprising and totally unexpected. I guess you will have a lot of audience to this part, from teens searching for love, to married couples remembering their first time to other curious people who want to know how it went on. It is great!

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This is so amusing to read. I loved how you described every detail about her and how he saw her. It is so romantic and nice. It is detailed and attractive. I could feel how beautiful she is. You did a very good job here.

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"I'll treasure this moment 'till the end of time." Such a memory is definitely worth remembering for a lifetime.

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Review of Mara  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello Akikomax
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled Mara.
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Describing a dancer and how she performs.

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Although dancing is not a new thing to me, however I am really impressed by the way you described Mara. I could see vivid images of her and her graceful and artistic movements. The essay is enriched with music, motion, beauty and magic.

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I loved the details of her movements and giving evidence like "Muscles squeeze and release with ease." There have also been some music in the way you used words that rhyme.
I loved imagining a girl who just drown in her world and does what she loves to do.

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I can't think of something to improve it. You may work on it whenever you wish to add but I didn't see a certain thing that needed more work on it.


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Review of Berserk  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hello Jeff
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled Berserk.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.


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This story is really one of the best written stories I have ever written. I love everything about it, from the idea where I could feel what that poor clown had to endure in his job, to his savage reaction when he could not longer bear what was happening, and finally knowing that it was just an imagination and he had to unwillingly make these innocent children happy. You are a great and skillful author.

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I loved the idea that the clown took his frustration down on someone and made all he wanted so brutally but in the end, it was all just in his mind. He still overcame his exhaustion and feeling hot and tried not to lose his job and satisfy these children. That is a tricky and unexpected end. Well done!

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I think it is just perfect so I can't add anything to it.


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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello ladygrace
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your entry entitled The "Poet Laureate".
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An american inspiring poet. It is my first time to read about her, thanks to your entry, but I sincerely loved what I read. I think it is a great thing for people to read about.

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She is not a well known poet to me and so I had to search quite well to find enough information about her. I didn't find much material provided about her and so it is great that you managed to write that much about her.
I loved reading about her and the passage was quite straight to the point.

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I loved the subjects that she wrote about in her poems and how inspiring she is.

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I didn't spot any mistakes.

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I usually love to know a bit more about her achievements and her life. You said that she had "undergone storms in life but able to stand", I wanted to know what they are? and how she could withstand them. So you can give more clarification for this so that we can be inspired by her life as well as what she writes.
Thank you so much for your entry in hats off.
You may edit your entry in the following hours before the contest closes.
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