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Review of Celestial Clowns  
Review by Pyrogue
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked the description. It wasn't super long description, but short enough for a poem. I also liked how you repeated "Then harken ye to morning sky." It helps the writing seem even more like a poem/song. I think you could make it just a little longer, though. Just a little.


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Review of What Do You Want  
Review by Pyrogue
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. This is really inspiring and I loved it. I wish more people would take the time to write things like this...
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