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Review by T.D Ange
Rated: E | (2.5)
I feel like you forced the rhyme of weigh station in the second couplet, but otherwise I'm ipressed by your use of slant rhymes. I don't think I got anything of the plot in this chapter but it sounds very fantasy oriented. Thanks for putting it out there.
T.D Ange
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for entry "Minute" 
Review by T.D Ange
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Unratable.)
Well thank you. The example you gave was very refreshing in explaining as well as being a pretty good poem. When I first began reading the explination I thought a poem like that would be very hard to accomplish but it looks as if you did that with ease.
good job.
T.D Ange
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