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Review by Captain Stevie
Rated: E | (4.0)
well im not sure who wrote this, either lance or you but hey its getting good. i dont know why im a nurse and in a place i detest by i truly love the familiarity of the setting between friends. its just like im watching us. like how it used to be b4 lance left. im enjoying it so far.
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Review by Captain Stevie
Rated: E | (5.0)
OMG AMAZING. AMAZING. Its so beautiful. You are a wonderful writer.
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Review of EASY LIES  
Review by Captain Stevie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wonderful Poem. Should be in a children book for morals. Teach them a thing or two. Great poem. Touching and truthful.
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Review by Captain Stevie
Rated: E | (5.0)
Gosh you know. Just anything you try u seem to succeed so well. I love the description. The way you describe is beautiful.
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Review by Captain Stevie
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That is beautiful. I can really understand how you are feeling in this poem. YOu can understand the loss and pain that you grieve. CHeck out my poems.
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Review of SHIPWRECKED  
Review by Captain Stevie
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Great Lance
Let the adventure begin
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Review of The Tale of Zak  
Review by Captain Stevie
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh lance this one is great. I love how u word this one, ""Tell me why i shouldn't kill you right now! Right now for all the things you've done to all the poor creatures you've heartlessly murdered! Give me a reason Goron! How does it feel to be powerless? To know that with one movement i could kill you so easially?" That is my favorite part. Lance im glad i read this one. great job
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Review by Captain Stevie
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
interesting lance, but for some reason im not into it. but good job.
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