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Review of Losing Faith  
Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (4.5)
I had to look up pyre to see what it is, but thats not your fault. Beautiful feel to this and it show's the emptiness that abruptly intrudes into our faith. You should right more & maybe something of a historic nature/ feel :) But I'm just an amatuer.

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Review of Spring  
Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very cute little ditty:) Keep churning them out.

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Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (5.0)
Mmmm...Made me so hungry for the work's! Great poem/ Ode to grandparent's everywhere:)

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Review of One Speck  
Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (5.0)
This speaks volume's I think. Anyone who has been through this can relate. Great work.
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Review of Brand New  
Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a really good rhyme:) You spelled "beand" in the first line instead of "brand", but really it's an awsome ditty.
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Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Brave is an understatement here. I have similar tales of childhood that I'm not able to write about yet, but I'm so proud of you for sharing your personal thought's this way. I think you have potential to write a book. A very helpful book:)
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Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very creative I think and imaginative. Similar to my writing patterns although I don't have many examples on here yet.
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Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very intellectual reading & from the heart.
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Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well said and beautifully written.
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Review of LOVELY OFFENCE  
Review by SunnyHayes
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like to read of adoration and bits of confusion:)
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