This story reminds me of that Bruce Almighty movie with the funny Jim Carrey. We can have clean fun with this one or be more serious with his responsibilities. If someone actually had those powers without any guidance, it can actually be scary unless you had wisdom and patience to go along with it.
Once upon a time there was a _dragon who wished he was a dog._______________________. Everyday,__the dragon would try to bark but just burst out fire.___________________________. One day,__an ulitmate wizard was saved from death by ths dragon._______________________. Because of that,__the wizard was able to produce a spell that made the dragon a dog.__________________________. Until finally,__the dragon was fed up with fleas and stratched himself so badly. He tried to find another wizard to restore his former dragon self but was unable to do so. __________________________.
I am from across the Pond, yes, I am from the US.
Politics have changed from both major political parties here. From what I am seeing here right now, Neither DT or HRC is likable and neither is the news media. Some are even considering voting for a 3rd party candidate in either the Libertarian party or the Green party.
Though I feel a little sorry for Thornton, Dave needed an ally and now do not have to worry about a bully. Dave is not going to tell anyone about the fairy. Who will believe him?
This story is fun and can allow for many variety of choices for the Wand of Wishes. I am enjoying the peter pan/mermaid story now. But there are other good ones too. I hope more readers will take part in it. What if your favorite character had that wand and used it....that is a good beginning for newer writers.
Hey, it is nice to have a 'good guy' Kyle with that gift. IHe is not a pervert about it. He can even just kiss them on the forehead. YES, girls can refuse. Beside something like that would be hard to believe.
It would be interesting to see how much responsibilities he uses in it. That includes the girls as well. Girls who are weak, average, weekend athletes, or even serious jocks can be benefited.
I meant to write this earlier. But this is a good beginning with Xan and Mikey. I could also see Xan being a 'good big brother-mentor'. It kept me in suspense. Caleb is in a long time of heartache unless he turns over a new leaf. (Hopefully the readers is familiar with that phrase.)
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