It has been a long while I came here and now, I discovered your newest story DemiGod.sounds fun...I have been reading stuff on fan fiction dot net lately. I wrote a chapter. Hope you are ok.
I just started a new chapter on the 'mad scientist' experiments. This story could go anywhere. It does sound promising.-4 stars I do have a few stories of my own too.
I am not sure if I reviewed this or not. But a kinder gentler alter boy with powers can be fun. Great responsibility comes with great powers.---that seems to be the theme. Someone could change it later but I think that our hero would not be evil. here is 5 stars for you.
Not sure how to rate this. But it is interesting to see how a male might react to being a superheroine. I am not big on R rating stuff but we still can do superhero things as heroes. I was hoping to add Hogwarts characters but it looks like that I cant. Don't worry. That is okay. here is a 3 1/2 star from me. It is not totally my cup of tea but some people may like it. I did add two chapters.
starting with the Hogwarts chapter of my own. Our author's own chapters look well so far that it can be its own fanfiction story. I wonder if he/she has one on fanfiction.net
It will be interesting to see how well Gil does in (well, I better not spoil it)
It is so sad. I was hoping that she would try to find another lonely or sad face at the school.
Middle School was sad for me even though it was in the same city. I should have exppressed my thoughts better back then and tried to seek out other people like me.
Happily High School was much better. In fact, in homeroom, the person next to me was a geninune kind person in the 'in' group(barely). So I was accepted.
I was trying to figure out which one would be the best for the Hogwarts books. Since the Houses had to do with the elements, it has to be the dynastic and elemental magic although Merlin and Dumbledore is the best example of the best.
The lower wizards can use wands but the higher level might be able to use wandless magic.
We need some more Spinach FMG stories that relate somewhat to Olive Oyl but not entirely. Thanks for this potentially good story and maybe you can add a chapter soon if you like mine.
is the just the first chapter of this story? I do remember this show. Too bad that the network cancelled it so soon, not giving it a chance to gain an audience. But that is not surprising. But it was great while it lasted.
There used to be a milk commercial that had the slogan Milk Does The Body Good. If you are reading this, it is okay to try out your writing skills. Almost anyone drinks milk and could experiences changes in a science fiction story.
In fact, I had some milk already...but thankfully nothing happened. LOL
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