Thank you very much for not just spouting your opinions in this piece and supplying your insight in the possible solution as well.
Illegal immigration is a subject that twists me in many different ways, and I am sad to say that there is no easy solution.
Title: Immigration
Although your title is short, sweet and to the point, it may be a good idea to investigate including some of the premise of the piece as well.
Grammar and Form:
The flow is good and easy to follow.
I found a minor grammatical error, and have a possible suggestion.
” … How many of us would willing take a three day journey …”
It should be ”willingly”.
Suggestions:
”… I think it unrealistic and disingenuous to think …”
You might want to put an ”is” in there.
You did a very good job.
Context and Content:
The plot is easy to follow.
Your sparse imagery is still effective in supporting your point throughout the piece.
You do a good job of interjecting brief glimpses into the physical realities of the subject matter, without becoming bogged down in description.
All of the following comments address points brought up by the author and are in no way intended to be harassing.
Additional Comments on Content:
”… As a nation, or at least as a people, shouldn’t we at least discuss this issue that affects millions of lives with something more than rhetoric? …”
The Immigration problem we are suffering from is one that truly tears me in two separate directions. I am a Strict Constructionist and wholeheartedly support the “rule of law”. At the same time, if given the choice, I would certainly prefer my tax dollars went to the ongoing support of illegal immigrants that come to this country, work hard, and better their lives as a result, instead of supporting Americans born here and unwilling to do what is necessary to provide for themselves.
Like I said at the beginning of this review, there is no easy answer.
” … Ultimately we have to develop a foreign policy with our neighbors that promotes industrial development and opportunities in their countries, so that people will not make such desperate attempts to risk all to come to the land of the free to be basically indentured servants. …”
First off, if we cannot effectively manage our own affairs in regards to this situation, what makes you think we have any business meddling in foreign affairs?
Secondly, don’t fall victim to the misconception that all illegal immigrants are one step out of slavery. This is a common misconception of people who are not familiar with the facts. It is well known where I live, that illegal immigrants can actually garner more pay than their American counterparts, due to their increased reliability, work ethic, and strong sense of commitment to whatever task they are asked to complete.
Mexico’s third greatest source of income is derived from proceeds surrounding wages paid in America, and sent back to existing households within their borders. Not to mention Mexico’s own Immigration policies and enforcement far exceed the standards of our nation.
” … This percentage continues to grow. At some stage, we will need to look at immigration not from a “rule of law” point of view, as laws can be changed. We will need to look at it from a humanity point of view, and start treating the problem with something more than political rhetoric that plays on the fears and passions of many, but does nothing to address the issue, to fix the issue, or even to have a decent discussion of the issue. …”
You have inevitably stumbled on the core of the problem.
It exists in the desire to supersede written Law, to address compassionate concern for the “humanity” surrounding the argument.
It all boils down to the basics.
If a house is on fire, you can use the tools available to put the fire out, or stand around and talk about it as it burns to the ground.
Thanks for the enjoyable read, and good luck on getting this problem solved.
Keep up the good work.
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