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Review of Pressure  
Review by I.M.Frayed
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I'm really glad that this ended with a positive note.
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Review by I.M.Frayed
Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
I'm not sure what I'm supposed to say about it. This small snippet has quite a few errors concerning grammar and sentences. I do like that there seems to be a real story that could come out. Select few keywords resonate to me. Overall the snippet seems to be more or less rushed and could use serious re-doing.
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