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Review by R. Kingly
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think a person's sexuality is no one's business. Marriage isnt just between a man and a woman. its between two people who are in love and want to spend the rest of their lives together
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Review of idea rush  
Review by R. Kingly
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a very nice piece of writing. I don't understand what the question is. Perhaps you didn't mean to make this a poll? I am very confused. However, this is a very good written piece of poetry, all the same,

~Endless Gratitude~

Miss. R. Kingly
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Review of The Fun House  
Review by R. Kingly
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WOW! Super Crreepy!! Guess Im not going to sleep now! LOL But anyway, this was a really amazing peice. I also lovee the illusiration. It was a little choppy though. More ands and becauses would be nice. Really fantastic. Thanks for sharing this and don't forget: WRITE ON!!!
~Endless gratitude~
R, Kingly
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Review by R. Kingly
Rated: E | (5.0)
First of all, good job! This piece is very well written. It is very insightful, and very satisfying. This was one of the most enjoyable reads Ive had on this sight. Thank you for sharing this piecce. Again, good job, and for the sake of the human race, write on!
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Review by R. Kingly
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In part II in the second stanza the last line does not flow very well. Perhaps you could try taking out "added" Just a suggestionI really can relate to this. My parents were ... are ..disfunctional and verbally abusive. Thank you for sharing your story. It's nice to know I'm not alone. THis poem had me hooked from the first stanza. It was absolutely magnificent. Please. Please write on.
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Review of The Promise  
Review by R. Kingly
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is very niec. especially the last stanza. It really shows emotion. I appreciate the fact that you havae rhymes, because poems with rhymes are harder and harder to find. It truly takes skill. Good Job, this poem was very well written And don't forget... write on!
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