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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, .

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The unique active picture that are eye catching and colorful.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*The only word count is a minimum of 15 words which is great.
*UmbrellaP*What type of item to write is left up to the write which leaves plenty of room for inspiration.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
*UmbrellaP*The past image prompts doesn’t work.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.
OR
OOPS!

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi NickiD89 ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Open Line Friday Contest Banner.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words are bold and stand out nicely against the background. They do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Pat,

I just dropped in and filled out the survey for How Was Your SAJ Shower? *UmbrellaP*The page is easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*I love the garden gate with the welcome sign at the top of the top. It’s so inviting.
*UmbrellaP*The pyramid of colorful umbrellas is a nice touch at the end.
*UmbrellaP*The boxes are large enough to write one’s answers in.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Shy Turtle  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Hi Who Me???,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Shy Turtle

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way the wee turtle‘s eyes keep blinking.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug
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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Witches' Dance.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about witches, magic and Halloween shall find this a delightful read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The fast pace and beat the words create.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full of energy and positive thoughts.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Imaginary Friend  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Ryanne Raven Starr,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Imaginary Friend.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry about lost and finding one’s way.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way it made me feel.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad. It left an ache in my heart.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS! I felt like I was out of breathe by the time I reached the end. I think this needs a bit more punctuation. With only two commas this reads like two extremely long sentences.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SublimeRhyme ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Ocean's Canvas .

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poems about the sea will love this one.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: How it made me feel as I read it.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Awe inspired. I wanted to go and take a look at the sea as it rolls onto the beach then flows back out.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about. Anytime I see the word sea in a title, I‘m going to take a peek.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. I love when a poem is centered. It gives it a unique shape.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Canvas  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi optimistic writer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Canvas.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry will find this interesting.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It has a nice pace to it.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad. I felt a lost.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi keikei,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read the beginning of your novel, Sins of a Woman.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about self-discovery and over coming temptation will find this interesting to red.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That the main character recognized evil was trying to corrupt her.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit afraid that evil would go after someone so young.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to understand. Yet many of the sentences are a wee bit to long. You need to break some of them down. Rewrite them if necessary to get your point across. A few super long sentences are okay.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Sins of a woman -- Woman should be capitalized in the title.

Then shall you call upon me and you shall go and pray unto me and I will hearken unto you and you shall seek and find me, when you shall search for me with all your heart. -- Whoa! This sentence has 36 words in it. It’s a bit long and probably needs to be broken down into at least two sentences, perhaps three. Maybe something like this:

Then shall you call upon me and you shall go and pray unto me. I will hearken unto you. You shall seek and find me, when you shall search for me with all your heart.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in. You did a good job staying in the first person.

*UmbrellaP*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order.

*UmbrellaP*BACKGROUND: There‘s really no background here, hopefully that will come as the story moves forward.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Itchy Water.

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at your Reviewed by Itchywater.

THe fairy with the flowers is adorable. I love it.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It made me smile and brightened my day.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Princess Dreamer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, Fairy Tale Twist Contest.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of History Contest  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Princess Dreamer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, History Contest.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: You chose a different type of contest. History is full of wonderful stories that can be awe inspiring.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
*UmbrellaP*It states whether or not an entry fee of gift points is required.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Prizes
1st place-- 10000 gps or a 10,000 award -- a 10,000 what?

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi fyn,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, A Shallow Sea of Dark.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the sea and writer’s block.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That you compared writer‘s block with the vastness of the sea. Both can seem more than one can handle, yet somehow we always find a way.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: That I‘m not alone with facing writer‘s block. That it can happen to the best of ys.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The colors add a bit of flare to the page.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: This just a thought.
No more to sink below the waters -- I think wave sounds better.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi silverfeathers,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I like your user name.

I just read your wee poem, Memory of a Memory.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry shall enjoy this. It’s quite powerful.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It made me reflect on my life.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit sad. It brought a few tears.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Wolf Guide  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ShelleyA,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Wolf Guide.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: I love how the wolf is in the clouds and looks as if he belongs there. Wolves fascinate me.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Sweet Dream Fairy  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ShelleyA,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at your Sweet Dream Fairy.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It gave me a feeling of cam and peace, and made me a wee bit sleepy.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Little Jack's Day  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Little Jack's Day.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read Nursery Rhymes and poetry about kids.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s short and sweet. The use of color grabs the reader‘s attention and brightens up the page.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It brightened my day and made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, Daily Flash Fiction Challenge.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The cool Gothic picture at the top of the page.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated or.
*UmbrellaP*Contest states whether you can write a story or a poem.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Curves  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ander,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Curves.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about finding one’s self.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The repeating of Straight away. It give the poem a neat beat.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Inspired to rediscover myself.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Hourglass  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Hourglass.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about death and dying shall find this quite interesting.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The repeating of the two lines: The sand softly falls, sparkling in the light,
We’re swept up in the flow toward final night.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It gave me a sense of peace and calm.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to find out what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi lilypad,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Marigold Among the Clovers.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about magic, gold, dragon or leprechauns shall find this delightful.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The spacing made it easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me smile and feel like dancing. It lifted my spirits.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Meditation  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi S. R. Hawkins,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Meditation.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about what the future holds for us all.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It speaks to my heart.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A gave me a sense of wonder.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The green color was an excellent choice since the poem is set in a forest setting.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Arendelle  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bertiebrite,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Arendell.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about mythical realms and magic shall find this delightful.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It speaks to my inner child.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Pat,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Pat's Poetry Parlour Image.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It has an old fashion feel to it. It reminds me of my childhood. Some good things along with some bad things.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jace,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

WOW! You have some really great photos of Pearl Harbor in your port from World War II.

I just read your wee poem, Nature's Conspiracy.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about nature and how it makes one feel.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way it made me feel.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It gave me a sense of peace and calm.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The larger font is easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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