this is amazing I have read some giantess interactive on this site but yours is clearly the best I love the story on this one and the characters and its the best one on writing.com all I hope is that I see more of your brilliant work on the site and get to write some more chapters
positively amazing short but amazing this is one of the best short pieces of writing I have read it just says that people need to be confident and don't let others bully them because of small differences you need to spread this message and tell the world this
a beautiful piece of work it short and simple but it is awesome none the less all I can say is I don't know who Scott is but this piece is amazing and I know you could do bigger pieces of writing from the quality of this piece just need to keep writing well done
this is amazing the work is amazing I could read it twenty times and still not get board you sure know how to write if me and you were to write a book it would be awesome the mind you must have is amazing and know great writers when I see them you can be a pro at this
brilliant this is the most impressive thing I have ever read the characters are amazing and really creative the locations are just as awesome and creative this why I really enjoy reading your work and I might add bits and pieces but overall it is brilliant
very nice work I know how to make a piece of writing like this I know how hard it can be people like me know great work when we see it this is one good piece I know how it can be to write something I know how people judge others but you have great peices
very nice work I know good work when I read it you have some skill not only for writing but for math two I know how hard it is to do something lie this thinking up new ideas putting the time and thought in to it and knowing how to put something like this up
I love this peice of work I enjoy reading this work the chapters the characters but most of all I love the storyline and how people always keep it fresh and new I am impressed how you and so many others keep it going you know it must be a challenge to keep it like this
this is one of a few poems I have seen about drugs this is one of the best I have seen but it tells me a lot about you how you feel to things and how you think as writer I do agree with something's in this but others I do not but a great piece none the less
a great piece of work I know it is hard to write something like this and it is a great piece of work im not a poetry person but I know talent when I see it and you have the talent of a pro writer if you keep writing quality like this you could write a full book
This is the best interactive I have ever read I have always loved this interactive I have added chapters not as long as yours but you are one of the best writers on this site and you should go pro for writing I know how hard it is to write and keep people interested well done
radio operator I know how that feels I work in a radio station and it is a pain having to know what to press and say at the right time but I do respect the history of radio and how it got from the 1940s to today it is how people have used it and they should respect the past
it might be short but it is a good instruction on how to get ready for bed and I know how much of a pain getting everything done before bed and then sleeping for hours and then having to get up and do it all again next night and again every night thought out the year
this is interesting the topic is a nice one but it is true faking emotions is a bad thing people need to learn that faking or hiding emotions need to tell the truth to whoever it is and be done with it I know how that feels it is not worth the torment but it is good that you have said this well done
this is a brilliant piece of work great characters are very imaginative and the location it is very impressive all this I have read it looks like it has a great storyline and I know a great piece of writing when I see it keep this going and you well go far in the world
a poem about guns a very nice choose of topic I love all kinds of weapons but guns are my very favourite and nice to see a poem about it and nice to see how some people have the same interests as me and this I will recommend to my friends nice work
first my condolences for the lose of grandfather to you and the family this is a beautiful poem to remember him and I know how you feel I lose my auntie late last year trust me I know it is hard but stay strong for grandfather and other around you good luck with everything
it might be short but it tells people how they fell about revenge and vengeance all this in the mind of humankind people think they can ignore their instances but they cant and that is what the says to me they are a part of us and people need to know this
their are some great things there first setting the scene I can just imagine it then the characters a classic choice mother and daughter then the story itself I classic story and it makes you think how a little piece of paper can change the world makes you think
ah a nice war piece of writing my kind of writing you I have always been into history wars and battles this is one of my favourite topics this piece of writing is one of my favourite war writing I have read many war pieces but this one is the best one
I love stuff like this about the past and how it echo's around people without them knowing stuff like this tells people how things in the past effect us today I know many of these stories but you have one here that is new to me well done on this piece of writing
it is short but it is true people look at each other in different ways I know how you feel but I had a different way of looking at things I am saying nothing your believes are you own I may not believe the same but my morals are the same I will not say anything
this is a brilliant piece of writing I know how hard it is to write something new and seeing the passion here I know we have writes who can keep this site going in years to come so hope you keep writing because you are really good at it best of luck to you
this is a brilliant piece of writing I know how hard it is to write something new and seeing the passion here I know we have writes who can keep this site going in years to come so hope you keep writing because you are really good at it best of luck to you
this is a brilliant piece of writing I know how hard it is to write something new and seeing the passion here I know we have writes who can keep this site going in years to come so hope you keep writing because you are really good at it best of luck to you
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