what a master piece of writing I don't know how you so it but you know how to do it I've read your piece and it is amazing the characters the themes and the title its all pure genius I really like your work and how it makes me feel about myself
this piece is very interesting I know how hard it is to make new ideas for story's or this one of the best pieces I have ever read the detail of the characters and the locations you are one amazing writer to keep classics like this alive would read again
this piece is very interesting I know how hard it is to make new ideas for poems this one of the best I have ever read and the locations you are one amazing writer keep up the great work and I hope you keep the work going well done on the piece keep it up
this is one of the greatest pieces I have read I know great writing when I see it you have the skill to be a pro writer when I read this im in a world were anything can happen this piece it I can imagine the characters the locations because the are greatly detailed
this is brilliant I know how hard it is to come up with interactive and one of best things I have ever read I hope you keep stuff like this coming because this a interactive I would love to see a follow up I am very impressed with this well done for your hard work
I love this interactive I know a great story when I read one on this is one of them it is both funny and a great read and you use a different type of girl instead of the common hot ones well done keep up the great work with this interactive awesome work
this is one amazing piece of writing and I love interactive I have to recommend you because this is work of pure geniuses the characters and the location it all takes a mind like yours to bring a thing like this to life and also offers a new perspective on teenage minds
this is one of the best interactive I have ever read I know how the characters and locations are all brilliant and the story it self is one of the best I hope you carry on writing because the site needs writers like you ones with imagination well done for this
a very creative piece of interactive work the story itself is awesome and the characters are interesting its good to see any original idea with original characters this is one of the reasons I like this interactive and all the different ways of doing things well done
this is a brilliant interactive great characters are very imaginative and the locations it is very impressive all this I have read it looks like it has a great storyline of the different characters and I know a great piece of interactive work and this is it
this is a brilliant piece of writing even thought its not my cup of tea I know how hard it is to write something new and seeing the passion here I know we have writes who can keep this site going in years to come so hope you keep writing because you are really good at it best of luck to you
this is one of the greatest pieces I have read I know great writing when I see it you have the skill to be a pro writer when I read this im in a world were anything can happen this piece it I can imagine the characters the locations because the are greatly detailed
I love this interactive the story of how the transformations and hoe the characters transforms this is one the best interactive I have read on this site and I know a great interactive when I read it and this is one of the best and I hope you keep writing you are amazing
forever what a master piece of writing I don't know how you so it but you know how to do it I've read your piece and it is amazing the characters the themes and the title its all pure genius I really like your work and how it makes me feel about myself
I love this interactive I know a great story when I read one on this is one of them it is both funny and a great read and you use fictional monsters and character if you keep producing story's and interactive like this I will keep visiting your page well done keep up the great work
this is way I am on this site to see people honouring the soldiers who fought for their country this worth of a medal for you for putting this amazing piece up on the site I want to thank you I had a great uncle who fought and died in ww2 and just seeing this thank you
a great piece of writing this may only be short but it still says a lot about a writer and how they think I know how hard it is to write something long or short you clearly have a gift for writing if you keep up the good work you could be a good as old jk Rowling's
now this is an amazing piece of work and I know amazing work when I see it this piece in first person of Emperor Nero's wife and being a history person myself I know how she felt and this dairy proves what see really thought of Nero you have done great work
something smells fishy but it not you work it is an amazing piece the character and the location it all fits in with the story you are telling and things like this it takes time to do something like this and I know how hard it is you keep up the good work and you will be a pro
amazing piece of work this is one amazing story It has great locations great characters and great speech of the characters I don't know how people like you go unnoticed this is an amazing piece you clearly know how o write keep up the good work and it will payoff
this very informative and i know a thing or two about how a writer thinks and feels and reasons for what he does and i respect that about writers they know what to do and when to do it and i respect you for information you have provid you sure know how to do this
this may only be a short piece of writing but you clearly have some skill in the field of writing and I am impressed I know skill when I see it and you clearly have the skill to go pro and you know how to write a story lets hope you stick to it good luck
this is amazing awesome and brilliant I love stuff that has history attached to it this one about the colonists and what I believe to be the British army I may be British but I don't know if im right or wrong but this amazing none the less and I have read your books nice work on this and on them
this a very compelling piece of writing it speaks for a lot of people who have made mistakes and said things they did not want to say myself included but just by typing this you are saying what people want to say but don't have the guts to say thanks
this piece is very interesting this is not my cup of tea but I give everything a chance it is compelling it is a great piece I all ways know great writers when I see it and you have it I think you need to go pro your skills as a writer as I read are unmatched
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