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Review of Battlefield  
Review by J Rubio
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hope u find a way to keep enjoying ur friend, about the work a find it a bit dificult to read, i mean u have nice phrases here, but the flow of each line its hard to get, its flowing and then pufff its cut, nice ideas there tough, nice to find people that share their feelings , even nicer to have a friend like you who cares
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Review by J Rubio
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Well, i found it interesting im sure as hell going to read the next chapter, the spaces you left on the left i didnt like, it was kinda troubling me to follow the reading, but about the contents its nice, i hope that book gives the priest power to turn that murderer into some smashed piece of "#$#"!
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Review by J Rubio
Rated: E | (2.5)
I think it has potential, the idea is cool, you could turn it into a great mistery or horror story, what the hell is she doing there, why is there nobody around , yeah!!! i like it
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