Wow!This is good so far. Very interesting.Time travel. I like how this story is developing. I
dont know a lot about horses but
I believe that from a fall it could happen or think it could happen. I like the ending about waking up and.wishing only.you knew what happened and.how or when. Wow! Waking up on another planet or somewhere else is weird but might would. I can imagine it.
Wow!That beautiful. I love this! Im not sure whether it would be a hymn but it can. Any words I suppose makes lovely music as long as you play the certain piece to the Lord. It wiuld.sound good im sure whether in a small church or a cathedral.
Nice work. Hadnt really started recycle. When I first come into the area. I tried it and wonder why bother but my soninlaw really into cans and metal.
Never really heard refuse like relationships. I guess if a person that has no home canmdo this it would keep him.out of trouble and perhaps find a.friend or two along the way.along the country road or even streets. I could see it a little to find a little piece of nothing and recycle it to art or put in a bend. Thanks.for the ideas!
Awesome poem. Spring is here all right one day warm another few days of cold then week warm again. Yes birds sing too. I love to sing when its pretty too. I agree the warm of sun bring beautiful days also. Yes,cant wait to plant a few seeds too that is definitely spring. Love the poem.
It might be fun to do but it would not work for me. I did not try many but the ones. I tried did not work. I even tried my sylus pen on my phone. It didnt either. I did like your words to describe spring though.ooh well. I push solve and it want go.back to solve did. I mess it up. Hope not. It would have been a fun puzzle.
Who knows what on that crazy person named Mt.Putin. You called him a fool and he is I guess. I really dont think he cares about his own country much less the world in general. Im not sure he is in his right mind. I dont like to talk ugly about anybody but is he a person. I like your description of him as eel or black widow. Yes. Why is right ? Why does anyone have the right to do what he is doing and not have any rights not taken
away. Keep on he will not have any rights either. Maybe thats what her wants.
Sounds good to me. I cant believe you just come here. I was here once upon a time but a couple of years as me. Im not very sure about this place but I have some good writing friends too. There are lots of writing here and there through. Im.glad you found writing.com. Faith is pretty name too. Through experience the writing will come
Awesome. The mouse is caught with the cheese in his mouth.
Once more the mouse is caught that week. Imagine a cat tries to get the mouse before she is caught by the old dog.Be careful what you get. It might catch you in the process. Love ihe color story.
Love the colors in this beautiful poem. I can imagine God painting his tapestry whether its mountain of flowers or us in our infancy to adult stage.You have compared the stages of life with beautiful colors. How impressive that is!
Yes. I can see the different seasons ofcolors as life changes in us. Awesome.
The poem was good. You need a little encouragement. When I started ten years or so I didnt know things either but I tried. I got better every poem or story. I am in process of gathering them up and rewriting them. Sometimes you can see your mistakes that way. I cant believe other times where I got those words. Keep writing.
God hears our whispers even our thoughts before then. Yes he reveals his thoughts to us if we are listening. Beautiful poem. God is everywhere. God is love. Your light shines through as sun through a cloudy day. I try to go church every time I can to get God word. God is there when you need him.
Nice poem. I have not had a cat until last a couple of years ago. Huggie was a beast at times and sweet at others. He went away and had not come back. I was giving another one except this time a girl. Wonderful girl. Her name is Precious. My cat is funny too. I like her better than my first one. I dont have an alarm clock cause she is my alarm clock and she stares me down until I wake up really Wonderful company too.
Neat puzzle to solve. I remember Alice in Wonderland thanks
For memories. I love puzzles of all kinds. Thanks. Never though about that as a neat write. Good choice too. I would have.not.done.something like this. No doubt it is quite an undertaking too.
Wow. I love snow but when it gets to being too much or too heavy to cause a mess that where I dont get out.
Snow is pretty falling and some snow cream would be delightful.
I use to like to get out in it but not anymore. I really like it when it snows a little and then melts again that day so it want cause traffic jams or too much messes. Never really.thought about pilots though. Good read.
Wow. I guess you need to be careful with that much ice. I live in North Carolina where there isnt too much ice or snow. This is a good poem. I personally dont like cussing but you didnt exactly do that. Thank you for that. I dont go out very much when it does snow or ice. Sunday is the only day I stay out cause.
I likte to go to church. Sunday morning and Sunday night. Sorry you fell and get back and blue. Falls. Arent suppose to be. funn y but this poem has a little bit of humor which I crave at times I was married for 42 years seven years ago and husband passed suddenly. Im not. funny and husband was funny so I love any kind of.fun ies.whether a tiny bit or a lot of humor..you did great.
Gee the lady went through a lot for her honey. I love honey too but I do not think Im going go through this and that for that precious honey. Honey does do a lot though. I do know a spoonful of honey will help a cough.
Gee. Im not sure Im thinking about how honey is made or what trouble you could get yourself into because of them. I dont think you should be alone now around honey and its bees. Thanks for the story.
Not sure what it is suppose to convey here though Ill try. To me animal is what you were trying to use to connect to the body. I dont know much about meditation but to me its good...
To me revealing the Deity. In other words you are saying the Holy sprit led you to write to the angels about God beautiful light. Yes one day I. Hope to go there and see my mom dad and hubby..wow that will be an experience Im sure. Good poem.
I love this. Yes God is good. He is always there for you and me. Yes we need to pray for everybody and everything. Praying is a good thing. There will always be evil in this world but by knowing God it can be stopped. Everybody needs God even if he or she does not know it as of yet. God is alive today. He hears every word. He loves you and me.
Awesome making something with driftwood. That wood be neat. I use to pick up driftwood. Wow, that would be amazing with biblical verses. Live laugh love. Walk barefoot in sand every day and home sweet home are good phrases. Even after twenty years no driftwood it was the phrases that stood out anyway. Good story.
Wow. Interesting. I guess you get that way when you are old. According to that Im not old at all cause I love songs: hymns,church songs. Maybe he didnt hear the right songs. Todays music isnt my music either. I get in car with daughter and granddaughter and I would have to yell ,cut it down too. I do love my church songs. Try it.
Sounds like a good cat for you to remember her. She must have liked that because of the hens nearby. I had a cat named Huggie last year that suddenly run and never come back but this past year. I have cuter one and she would wake me up around seven every morning. She is a delightful cat too. I think she will be a year old next month. Have wonderful memories. In fact if you can get a kitty for they will give you love and company to.
This is good. Awesome. Wow. Yes Jesus is coming again. I do believe it is true. I cant wait to see him in heaven along with my hubby and mom whom passed with the past seven years among others. They say heaven is hard to imagine. This world isnt too good at moment either.
Wow. I didnt know anything would work except rest and maybe a few days try again.
Ill but this is just a story or tale of writing and writing and not doing much and then seeing something inspiring and exciting to write about. It is good.
Good to me. Im having something like that now. No ice nor snow so far. Something is always good if you expecting winter storm. Simple but nice poem. Life is somewhat like that especially if God is in it.Wherever you are is their a winter.storm or you have white.stuff already?
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