This was really cool. I will admit I'm not a big fan of Trixie but I think this story was really awesome. Also I think you were right when you gave us a warning about being like "Loud Mouth".
The only thing I have to say about this is.....wow. Even though I don't have a girlfriend this poem made my brain think up what life would be like if I had a girlfriend so great job on that. This was the best poem I ever read on this website. If you keep doing stories, poems or anything else like this I think you may have a future as a writer. Keep going and you may be considered one of the best.
I think this one was the best out of your three. The reason why is because this is when we read that Twilight and Kyle are starting to fall in love with each other. I'm also perfectly fine with the "Foot Fetish" I don't have a foot fetish but I think this was a good choice. Also I don't know why I didn't get this earlier but I'm pretty sure that these three stories take place "during" the original "Equestria Girls" movie.
Short and to the point. You make an excellent point with this Haiku. Because Silence literally means "no noise". For your first ever addition to Writing.com I say you knocked it out of the park. I hope you can do more story's or Haiku's like this one. I'll be sure to read and review every new addition you make. Good luck.
I think this story was pretty cool. I like how you used SO many analogies into this story. I'm not a spy but I can understand that spy life can be hard. There's not much room in the schedule for sleep. I like how your giving us a cliffhanger as to what's gonna happen next with the spy.
I don't understand why this has NO ratings. This is an AWESOME story. I especially love the chapters where we date Sunset Shimmer. She's my most favorite character of all time. And (in my opinion) the cutest. For Friendship is Magic it would be Fluttershy.
I've read each and every one of the ideas here but I've never gotten this far before. On ANY story I read. This is my most favorite Anthro story of all time. It's second on my "most favorite story's of all time" but that doesn't mean that your story is bad. In fact, it's QUITE the opposite. I love the fact that Dusk now can change to either his demon, anthro, AND his human form at will. No longer needing people around him to think of him as a human or monster. The Amarok choice is THE BEST one in this whole story. Thanks for making this story happen.
PLEASE make more of these story's. I really love them. I've only read a few stories but these three are by far my favorites. Please don't stop making these story's. Plus I may have an idea for a fourth story. I'll email it to you.
Once upon a time there was a kid who wanted to sing. Every day he would practice his voice to the peak of perfection. One day he was called to be part of American Idol. Because of that he went on to become the overall winner of American Idol. Until finally he ended up going on a lot of tours but luckily was able to find enough time to be able to spend with his family.
I'm actually really confused on what this story is about but it's actually pretty good. I've seen multiple stories about how someone's trying to decline that that person has a crush on another person. I think you have a really nice story. I'm glad I reviewed it.
I am absolutely creep'd out by this story. I just wanna say great job at it. I love how creepy it is at the start and then it gets MUCH creepier as the story progresses. That was amazing I'm really glad I got this to do as a "Read and review". This would be absolutely perfect for an actual horror story. Maybe if you have the time you could actually make this a full fledged horror story. Now I've read some very weird stuff before. (Mostly Goosebumps books) but this has took creep'd out to a whole new level. I love it. I would give thi story a 5/5.
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