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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting and enlightening. Thanks.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
With just a few words you have created a vibrant scene. Very nice.
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for entry "Complimentary Closing" 
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm really not much of a fan of free-form poetry. (I always attempt to use rhythm and rhyme - one of my many shortcomings.). But I looked through your portfolio and discover this poem and I really like it. Very nice - although very sad and depressing too.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is extremely discouraging when the people that should protect, support and represent you are the very ones who will cause you harm. Good luck with this situation.
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Review of Raindrops  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nicely done. You paint a lovely picture.
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Review of Maybe  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
You definitely put a lot of emotion into your poetry. You convey a lot with a few words. Very nice.
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Review by Norman
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good one!
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
More true today than ever. You might consider updating this. You could go on, and on, and on...
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Review by Norman
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very entertaining. Thanks.
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Review of The Night Road  
Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Nicely done. You build up the suspense, so even though we think we know what is coming, you still surprise us.
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Review by Norman
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is actually quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Growing up in New York and riding the subways to work, I would often see performers, but I never gave them much thought. Assuming this is factual, I wish you all the best.
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Review of Writing a Novel  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Enjoyed this a lot. Very humorous and well written.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well done. Keep on writing.
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Review of Love Slips Away  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Some strong emotions here - you can feel the pain. Nice.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Funny. I love a gotcha moment.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sounds like it would make a great children's book. Very nice.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice suspense. Well done.
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Review of Puzzled  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ver nice. It reminded me of a song by Bobby Darin - Eighteen Yellow Roses. But I enjoyed your version also.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this. Nice imagery. Could feel the longing and nostalgia.
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Review of Clutches  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (4.5)
Okay, I'm getting into the story and want to see where it goes. You defined your main character very well and now I'm interested.
You do have some grammatical issues, nothing serious.
("wander" instead of "wandering", toward the end, and "as satanic". shortly after that)
But you did throw me off with the train trip - an eight hour trip leaving at six and arriving at midnight? You might adjust that.
I am looking forward to reading more.
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Review of A Blade of Grass  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this. Great imagery. Nice rhyme and meter. And, of course, a message to think about.
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Review of Summer Harvest  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey, you left out pumpkins.. Nice job, good rhythm and rhyme.
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Review of Sweet Peggy Lee  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
So in my poem I dreamed of Elvis and in yours you dreamed of Peggy Lee. Maybe we're on the same wave length. Nice job. I like your rhyming and rhythm.
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Review of Dream  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice. I like not only the message, but also the rhythm and rhyme and the beginning of each verse,
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
We had a tree like this nearby our previous home. Even after it had long died, people would pull over to the side of the road to take pictures of what had once been a big, beautiful tree, standing alone in a cow pasture. Then it became a solemn monument until nature finally claimed it. Nicely written.
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