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Review of The Outcry  
Review by Jodbug
Rated: E | (5.0)
Unfortunately, change can not be affected without the "rebel yell." It's a pity that so much violence and anger seem to be the only ways in which the human race can demand a new status. It's inspiring to see the many faces of oppressed nations banding together and demanding change, however it is disheartening to see how technology has effected the minds of the modern man in North America, those of us who cower behind computers and cell phones and do nothing for ourselves or our countries. Thank you for posting such a thought provoking piece.
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Review by Jodbug
Rated: E | (5.0)
I adore this piece. It makes me think of my mother who is constantly going on about her wrinkles and how old she looks. I always just tell her that every wrinkle- every line, has a story and shows that she's lived her life. She needs to read this! Thank you for sharing such beautiful words.
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Review of One More Memory  
Review by Jodbug
Rated: E | (5.0)
So very sad and haunting :( I would love to hear it!
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Review of Behind The Door  
Review by Jodbug
Rated: E | (5.0)
So dark and foreboding. It left be breathless. The obsession that is writing and the dark matter behind it- simply stunning. Thank you for sharing!
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Review by Jodbug
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my word, thank you for the chuckle! Not what I was expecting at all! Lol! Brilliantly written, loved it!
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Review of A Daughter  
Review by Jodbug
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful, straight from the heart. She's a lucky girl and very blessed to have you!
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Review of Having My Cake  
Review by Jodbug
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hmm, a subtle insight to the cause and effect of greed...However, the idea has now turned me off of cake forever! Thanks for the chuckle!
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Review by Jodbug
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the simplicity and the child-like view of the cookie. I think that if you were to dive into that concept even more and explore those ideas further, you would have a real winner here. Ace job though, it totally brought a smile to my face and sweet nostalgia!
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Review of Why I Write  
Review by Jodbug
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful and eloquent way of describing such a profound art as is writing! I would really love to raise my glass to you after reading this. The timing and rhyming (pardon the pun) are brilliant. Thank you for welcoming me into your imagination!
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