I'm really pleased to see that you have responded to such opinions, and I'm sure you know that most of the free members of this site appreciate the services you give and remain free members due to lack of funds only. Some people are just never satisfied.
This is brilliant! I agree with you that free membership is great, and although most ppl would opt for Upgraded given the choice, there are a lot of oppurtunities there for free members.
This is amazing! So original! I'm curious as to what happened, but I also think the end is very good as it is because it gives hope - maybe she can help him. Wow! This just blew me away.
This is a good basic guide. It's very easy to forget about starting out when you have been writing for a long time, but its good to see that you have made this effort to help newbies.
This is great. So original - it doesn't condemn the Internet as many could have. You show no bitterness from your experiences, you have learned and seem to value the experience.
But you also acknowledge that the internet can be extremely positive for people.
This is such an honest, and balanced article. You make the reader consider the dangers of entering into net relationships without forcing the warnings down their throat.
And as someone who has been there and done that, it is great that you should write this and allow other people to consider their options.
This is good but I feel it needs some punctuation so it easier to read it. The message is very powerful, very apt today - we forget that not everybody has happiness, and it can be a very lonely time.
REMENISCE - not sure, but I think it is reminisce... look it up
I think the lines of stanza 1 all starting with W is really effective.
I think the importance of LIFE would be made clearer if you just capitalized the L.
The little old lady image, and the rich guy image, are dare I say it, cliches. You could spend a bit of time making them more original, so they leave an impact.
This is really good! No spelling mistakes, very easy to read (I'm studying Blake... I see the similarities!), the rhymes are simple but not too obvious, and yet the poem has a real sincerity to it. Very good.
Katie
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