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Review by D.E. Viant
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
This is an interesting poem. The image of a dragon trapped inside a single tear is a good symbol of feeling trapped in the pain of loss. In the second paragraph, "dragon tear" is repeated and it feels redundant. Also, "Fearful clouds in a sky that are now cold-clear," should probably be "Fearful clouds in a sky that IS cold-clear". Overall, the poem is good but still needs a little polishing.


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