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Review of The Flying Funk  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'd keep that Flying Funk, if only just for fun :) Wonderful story for sure!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! I thought it would be a challenge to write on this prompt, but you did very well. My compliments! It is a well written story and I loved the end :) Marie Laveau would be proud!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Excellent poem. :)
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
A happy end - nice to see that the birds survived. Well written.
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Review of The Last Laugh  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
It could be a scene, written for a historical based series like Deadwood for example.
Could see the entire scene happen right in front of me.
Well done you, for writing vivid; it kept me reading from start to end.
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Review of I guess not  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ouch. Still I feel that Vinnie thought he had found the love of his life. Well written.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
I expect them here to bloom within two weeks, Nature is early here this year. Enjoyed your beautiful Villanelle.
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Review of Wedding Surprise  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Excellent story. I wonder how this will be solved.

This needs a fix: Clara's fiancMatt came
é in fiancé is missing and it needs a space.
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Review of Jersey Lily  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Enjoyed reading this scene - I hope Luke will find a decend job one day.
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Review of Wild Cat  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
I need to go and ride the Wild Cat one day... but am afraid my family is not allowing me to do so. Enjoyed your poem:)
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Review of The Carousel Ride  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
A story filled with memories and sadness. I hope Anna will enjoy the caroussel in a better way some day
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this story for sure. Especially about Polly and the idea that the world can be a better place in everyone's mind. Like it a lot.
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Review of Nothing I Knew  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
LOL! Clear caché memory, my friend before taking images. Enjoyed reading your Villanelle, you are a true master in this form.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ack! Must be quite devastating to see parrots instead of eagles. I really enjoyed your story, and hope that the main person will find out one day who took the parrot pictures. Well done!
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Review of MI6  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.0)
You need to change rating for your story from E to 13 + due to violence. War is always tough, especially in foreign territory.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great story... notify me when you write the next part of this story, will you?
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Review of The Broken Figure  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sad actually how Kyle responds, turning himself to more violence instead of learning from his deeds. Hope he will change one day.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sad to read about Bishop and the loss of his help and friendship. I hope you'll find another companion one day...
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Review of A Fond Farewell  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Shirley jumped out ran over to him and gave him a kiss, squeezed his hand tight and jumped back in the car.

Add in this sentence a comma and it will read a lot better.

Shirley jumped out, ran over to him and gave him a kiss, squeezed his hand tight and jumped back in the car.

A few other sentences needs comma placing too. Please take a look at that - it gives the reader time to breathe, so to speak. Otherwise eyes will fly over it, without absorbing the meaning of the words.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ah Piaf... Je ne regrette rien :) Well written!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written. I have to put the song on my list and listen it tomorrow morning :)
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Review of It Makes Me Think  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
I hope that hate may die one day. Wonderful Villanelle.
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Review of Writer's Cramp  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A fun to read and witty poem. I like it!
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Review of My entry  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh my! That last sentence is priceless :)

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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmmm... I would suggest The Writer's Cramp to check on spelling, typo's and comma placing in the first place, as there were some things that absolutely need to be fixed. But hey, who am I, I am just the foreigner in their judges team, and fortunately not the author of this note.

You brought me a big smile, especially with the last stanza. And when you all were busy writing, I spent my time knitting, finishing a gansey. (that is the advantage of having a Writer's Block since 2006 I guess)

I really enjoyed your letter!
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