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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
One day we see the first crocus... can you imagine that they are blooming in full in our country already? And the first daffodils were blooming in January... Winter is off-beat here for sure.
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Review of Pursuit of Padma  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
There is more to come in this story. You kept me reading. Well done!
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Review of Gone  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sad... but I know the feeling. Spread the text a bit on the page, to in order to let the words stand out a bit more. That way the words will have more effect on the reader.
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Review of Groundhog Vision  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written. Wish we had groundhogs here :)
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You can go your own way... indeed.
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Review of Just Go Away  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
A piece out of life... sad is the way your stepmom acts.
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Review of The Static Pen  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
And the only part of The Netherlands without any snow, is the part I am living in.... Fog and damp here :( But you wrote a splendid poem.
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Review of Come Sail Away  
Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hmmmm... Clari leaves this story with an open end... what happens next? You have a great start for a longer sci fi story in hands, my friend!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to get to know you a bit better :) And keep on writing, of course. Hope the spirit of words will hit me one day too again... ( I am in a proper writers block, since the moment my youngest son announced himself, and he is now eight years old - but since 2009 I have been published in quite a different genre; knitting and crocheting pattern writing. Quite a challenge to do that in at least two languages (Dutch and English) But your blog is well done.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.0)
Quite a weird story. Enjoyed the read though.
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Review of spreading gossip  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great story. Want to find out what happens next...
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Review of After the Game  
Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
One still to go in this sentence: “There’s no reason to be sorry,” said brandy. “I’m the one who dropped that easy pass.”


But I am glad you corrected the other ones. Well done.
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Review of After the Game  
Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I enjoyed your story. If you read through it, correct your punctuation and some small errors, I will award you the extra star.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Looks like a good scene of a maffia movie. Well done.
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Review of Winter's Edge  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful!
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Review of Jagged Glass  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Maybe... but that will turn against her one day. Well written.
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Review of Jagged Glass  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A poem with quite a few questions that needs to be answered. Enjoyed.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have a huge respect for people who can write a good sonnet. Yours is excellent.
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Review of Five-Finger Moore  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Glad Finger turned his life into a better one :)
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Excellent write. :)
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Review of Dangerous Words  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wonderful! I like it. :)
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well written story. My compliments. Hope Harold will achieve his goal one day though...
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Review of Frame Job  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Nasty end... poor Sheriff
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Review of Party Peeper  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well written!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I guess that would be impossible...:)
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