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Review of Y'all Come!  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Smile* Wonderful story! I enjoy hearing the version of Bobby Bare and the Hillsiders from time to time. And I sure hope Elliott is not going to give up playing banjo for a long time.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Even in Fairy land, the tax trolls find their way. I thought it was a happy place. Enjoyed reading your story.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well - this is a lovely ABCedarius - plus one. Well written.
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Review of Long-held Dream  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting - I looked up at Wikipedia for some information about Cebuano. There is a lot to learn for me - and now I have to find out which language the wife of my cousin speaks as she is from the Phillipines. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Review of Stubborn German  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a lovely story. And partly written in German too - I enjoyed reading. A few tiny tips: In this sentence: "Ich wollte, dass es eine erraschung ist. Ich habe dieses Gefuhl nicht von dir erwartet."
Erraschung should be Überraschung, und Gefuhl needs an Umlaut - Gefühl. And in this sentence:"Wir wandern wie frer als Kinder." frer should be früher. These corrections should make your work perfect.
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Review of The Man in 1204  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading and hope Andy and Harold are able to play plenty of checker games.
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Review of She'll Be Back  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poor Angie. Well written.
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Review of Nature  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful. As I write, I am listening to the birds...
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Shakin'Stevens once sung about a green door. Enjoyed reading your poem.
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Review of Crabby Dash  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely poem. *Smile*
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Review of Color Symphony  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful!
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Review of Fruits  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sweet story! Well written.
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Review of The Hawk  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nothing wrong with keeping the woods. Matilda is a brave lady.
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Review of Valentine's Hawk  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love it. And may Mara and Maxim have a long and prosperous life together. *Wink*
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Review of A Dozen Siblings  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Last week someone told a dozen school children that his child held 250 spiders in his room. People wondered themselves why. Made me glad that Dozen is not my child... Well written.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good to keep in mind that it is nonsense... but you will never know what happens in the future.
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Review of Half Dozen  
Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Fun to read, this one *Wink*
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written!
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Review of A Queen's Rest  
Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well written.
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Review of The Dragon's Fall  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful!
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Review of I Almost Forgot  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely dreamer Kettu is. Well written.
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Review of Winter Vacation  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem.
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Review of On Writing  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent!
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Review of To Listen  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Check the second line of the first stanza. I believe there is one syllable too many.
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