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Review of religion is dead  
Review by Lauren
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is so true..
everyone is completely destroying religion
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Review of Separation  
Review by Lauren
Rated: E | (4.5)
wow. i really like your wording in this poem. it was very deep and i could feel how you felt. i also like the comparisons in this poem. i wish i could think of creative things like this... also, were you about to say i love you? or please dont go????
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Review by Lauren
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
you do want to live!!!!,... you do!!!
great emotion and very deep. but you do want to live :b
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Review of Letter To Myself  
Review by Lauren
Rated: E | (3.5)
this is really good! i like how you asked why there were questions but no answers,... i always feel this way.
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Review of i am  
Review by Lauren
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are my twin EXCEPT.... I'm louder :p
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Review of Happiness  
Review by Lauren
Rated: E | (5.0)
i love the beach!! :D and fruit. yumm.
nice comparisons
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Review of Siren song  
Review by Lauren
Rated: E | (3.0)
im not quite sure what to think about this one... and thats a good thing!!! I like ones that make me think...
Its a really good piece but im having some trouble decifering it. for some reason i think about a fire. i guess i associated "siren song" with "earth again takes all the gold"
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Review of please dont.  
Review by Lauren
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I really like how a lot of people could relate to this poem. Although many people dont openly share their feelings about things like this, young lovers often feel this way.
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