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I am honest, but kind and encouraging. I will offer ideas if something strikes me.
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Poetry is my first love.
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relationship, romance, drama, and things which break the heart
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I don't have the proper time to review novels, chapters, and things of that nature. Plus, they aren't my strongest suit. I'm not comfortable with critiquing items that I couldn't create, but I have a great appreciation/envy for those who can*Smile*
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Yellow Rose,

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


Happy Writing.Com Anniversary! Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* Your poem shows that it is the simple things that first drew the two of you together. Good use of description in the first stanza, which allowed me to shape the person in mind when reading this.

Rough hands that knew and loved God’s land

*Exclaim* this is a great way to show experience and part of his character!

Write on!
~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


JenP,

Happy 11th Writing.Com Anniversary! Hope you don't mimd my comments or suggestions!

*Thumbsup* Great title, which attracts the reader. I think that when we have a connection with someone and it fades away or ends, we tend to lose a piece of who we are. Things become strange to us and we no longer know how to feel, behave, or how to cope with the days ahead. Your poem supports that and I can easily identify with it. Nicely done.

*Notev* One thing I noticed:

But its still not the same
said its over
*Bullet* it's because you mean "it is".

Write On!
~ Lexi
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Review of Your One and Only  
Review by Lexi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Tracey,


*Thumbsup* This is a lovely and adorable poem. I really like you made this about a couple that has been together for awhile and experienced much of life. I think the reflection shows that they have stood by one another, but are still able to feel warm and fuzzy toward one another.

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Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Mista,

*Thumbsup* This is a very sweet poem. It's funny how when you have feelings for someone they can make you rethink the way you see things. Sometimes, you start to do and appreciate things you never would have before they came into your life.

fable inexplicably realized
*Bulletg* Great way to show a dream come true, or something you did not even know existed.

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Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Tracey,

*Thumbsup* When time spent together is enough rather than material gifts that is a wonderful thing. Your poem is shows that and mixes in imagery in a sweet, dreamy way.

dreams dancing
*Bulletg* alliteration and personification*Smile*

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Lexi
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Review of Feelings  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Seabreeze,

*Thumbsup* Often, I think it is hard when we are uncertain of what we feel and why we feel things. Love can cloud our judgement sometimes and we don’t even realize it. We offer our love to someone, and don’t always see or understand that when we give it, it’s not always reciprocated. I think that many people will be able to identify with this.

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Lexi
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Review of I am...  
Review by Lexi
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Cadie Laine,

*Thumbsup* I think that you show what unconditional love means to you. It can be tough when you give all of yourself to someone even after they have faltered. It says a lot when you're wanting to take on their pain and sorrow.

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Lexi

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Review of My Magician  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Cadie Laine,

*Thumbsup* I think that your poems shows a multitude of things of what your love is for you, and how much he means to you. When a couple is able to provide a variety like this, it shows true appreciation for one another.

*Note* One thing I noticed:
My Magician is my loves who loves to make love to me.
*Bullet* My Magician is my love, who loves

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Lexi
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Review of OPPORTUNITY LOST!  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Jaiam,

I really like that you show what he thinks about her and what he might reveal to her if he could muster up the courage. This is much like life though, we think of all these wonderful things to say, but often have a difficult time letting them know before it is too late.

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Lexi
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Review of LEAVE ME - NOW!  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Jaiam,

I think that this is a declaration of love that states: love me or leave me. The third stanza is my favorite, like you are saying, “let our love set the precedent for others.” This has a lovely flow to it, and the lines per stanza were an interesting decision.

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Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dave,

*Thumbsup* I really appreciate your references to Hank Williams and Kris Kristofferson in this. I thought that it was quite creative. I think that your poem shows how passion can fizzle quickly, and there does not always need to be a reason as to why. It also shows a truth which is real in relationships. Two people cannot possibly have an equal amount of feelings for one another. Whether the feelings be very strong or weaker in measure, someone is going to care more than the other, and one is going to care less than the other. At least, that has been my experience and that can be heartbreaking. I found this to be an honest write.

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Lexi

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Review of Lost  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Cynaemon,

*Thumbsup* This poem shows conflict between love and hate quite nicely. I think that it feels like an almost Romeo situation- minus the ending of the loss of Juliet. Lost is the perfect way to describe what is felt once our love is no longer with us.

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Lexi
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Review of Silently Running  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Cynaemon,

*Thumbsup* Though this is short, it does not lack imagery or emotion! I think your words do a wonderful job and allowing the reader to see and feel what life is without your love. An hourglass that was unable to hold the sand was a nice symbol to use to show love falling away.

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Lexi
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Review of Dance Me A Song  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
TurtleMoon,

*Thumbsup* Dance and song are great things to use when writing about relationships and love. Sweet, lovely, and innocent.

Until we vanish in heavenly dust without a trace
*Bulletg* I think this is a great way to express the phrase until we die, and much more poetic!

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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
TurtleMoon,

*Thumbsup* Your title is a lovely metaphor for romance and love. There is an old-fashioned feel to this poem, and I do not mean that in a bad way. It is actually a compliment, like the poem holds an innocence and reminds me of a courtship where time and distance separated them physically, but the love always remained.

love's lunar light
sends splendor
*Bulletg* good use of alliteration!

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Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Callum,

*Thumbsup* I really appreciate music too, so I am that you found a platform to create a poem (and a story) inspired by a certain song. I think that sometimes people take for granted the person they love, not realizing how it affect it would have if they were no longer present. I love the imagery in the line made from thunder keep waking the dead from their slumber.

When posting in the forum you said, “I tend to be overly ambitious (unfortunately it's my nature, but I'm working on it), and so my ideas I want to express often go over a reader's head, lost in abstract expression and ambiguity.”
*Noter* When writer’s express themselves through abstract images and/or phrases, it allows the reader to interpret the pieces in various ways. It’s not black and white, so therefore it can mean something totally different to me as it does to the next reader. That is not a bad thing!

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Review by Lexi
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Jess,

*Thumbsup* I really like how much thought you put into the questions about love into this poem. You capture some sweet moments that pinpoint affection and admiration, but not necessarily love. They say that love just happens, but I think we cannot help but analyze it for ourselves. In the poem, I like you touch base on the moments that you think you did not start loving the person, but in the end question yourself that maybe you did! I think it was a great decision to break this up into stages/acts like you did.

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Review of Before 8 November  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello there, Hoovsie. I am back again!

This review comes from me on behalf of "Powerful Heart Review Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* I adore this! It really says something when someone has to question what, or even if there was anything before the person you love came into their life. This is a sweet and loving tribute, which pinpoints the very beginning of the relationship. Simply, a beautiful treasure found in both life and in your poem! Congrats on the well deserved award.

Write on!
~ Lexi

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Review of In A Mirror  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Amyjo,

This review comes from me on behalf of "Powerful Heart Review Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.


*Thumbsup* I do not know of a woman who has not experienced this exact thing! I look at pictures just from last year and do the same darn thing! Every year there is a new and uninvited something. I think this poems says what many of us are thinking. Reflections are not always kind to us, yet we get up and do it all over again!

Congrats on the award and write on!
~ Lexi
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Review of Any Time C-Notes  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Maryann,

This review comes from me on behalf of "Powerful Heart Review Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

I actually came across this a few weeks ago when I was looking for an “any occasion” C-Note. I was impressed with the clear and beautiful images (and low cost value) you had to offer. The images give me a serene and tranquil feeling. I appreciate the fact that they were blank. Most of us love to write, so it gives the sender a clean slate to design a personal message without worrying if the phrasing on the note is appropriate.

Job, well done!
~ Lexi
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Review of Flames  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hans,

Welcome to Writing.Com!

This review comes from me on behalf of "Powerful Heart Review Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* Your descriptive words allow me to see images of the events taking place in my head. Your brief description says a non-specific poem, but you did just the opposite of that by giving details! I love when a poem takes a turn, and it is not given away in the middle. Your ending had me gasp!

Great write,
~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Welcome to Writing.Com, Arjita,

This review comes from me on behalf of "Powerful Heart Review Raid" . Hope my comments and/or suggestions are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* I like the title chosen for your piece. I think that it is great when you have the sorts of friendships that bring you happiness. It's always important to celebrate that!

its the lustre
*Question* Did you mean it’s the luster?

*Idea* May I suggestion a few different line breaks or use of punctuation? Without breaks or punctuation the lines seem to jar together and it can confuse the reader a bit. Here is just an example of what I mean:

it’s the luster of morning the wonder of evening

it’s the luster of morning,
the wonder of evening

OR

it’s the luster of morning, the wonder of evening

has quarrel enough as well as is loving
one is angry young man other is like a joker
*Bulletg* Consider rewording this slightly. I think I know what you mean, but to help clarify :

Have we quarreled enough out of love?
One is an angry young man, other is like a joker

I think you have some presented some nice qualities on friendship, and if you polish it up a bit with grammar/punctuation/line breaks it will read smoother. These are just suggestions and ideas. If you would like more help with this, please let me know*Smile*

Continue to write and grow!
~ Lexi
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Review of A Perfect Love  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Jen,


This review comes from me on behalf of "Powerful Heart Review Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* This is a lovely poem to celebrate the upcoming holiday. I think you capture what a perfect partner is to you. Without them, there's a missing piece and to me that feels like true love. Sweet tribute to honor your fiance.


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~ Lexi
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Review of Starbucks  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there, Maryann.

This review comes from me on behalf of "Powerful Heart Review Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* First, as an avid Starbucks fan, I have to tell you that out of all the titles listed on the Raid Page that my eyes totally caught this right away, which definitely made me laugh. Your poem speaks truth about our caffeinated, yet friendly beverage- homemade coffee is just not the same anymore. Acrostic poems are a lot of fun to create, and I can tell what a fan you are from the poem, so I am toasting my venti to you right now.

Write On!
~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Kristi,

I came across a format that said you invented it, and since I was impressed by the Alpha Torqueo, I decided to drop by.

*Thumbsup* When someone writes on tragic happenings that has affected them personally it can be cathartic. I feel the lack of closure through this heartrending poem. Your descriptions allowed me to see the scenes in my head, which are devastating to imagine. I am truly sorry for your loss and for the lack of closure that you must feel. I hope that you are some day able to feel at peace.

Write On,

Lexi
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