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Review of LIFE AS YOU SEE  
Review by lilbro
Rated: E | (1.0)
I am not a "professional" reviewer of the writings of others, however, I am "honest, encouraging (at least I try very hard to be) and most definately "respectful" of my fellow "human beings" and with that said, i'd like to practice these principles in my amateur review of this writing. First, the title of your essay struck a chord in me and because i am an ardent admirer of this precious thing we call life. Life is like a work of art, a thousand people can look at a painting and when ask what they see, nine times out of ten you will get as many different descriptions. I think the concept of your essay is heartfelt and admirable, however, it is a much more complicated subject and requires much more development. There are truths in your essay that in my opinion could use further expounding upon, each truth, or personal impression, can be a paragraph unto itself. You are right in your assertion that "life is not easy to live, and we do have many things to deal with" but there are many that life is not difficult to live and don't have many things to deal with." What are the dynamics of the expectations we have for ourselves and others, do these expectations of ourselves and others...make life difficult? This can be a very inspiring essay, and I encourage you to continue to develope it Arishay!
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