What an interesting tale. I have never heard of a crossover of myths like this before. It is very clever. Loki is such a sneaky so-and-so. Only he could away with pulling tricks on other deities like that. I can't help but wonder what he wants the ankh for though. I thought he was already immortal. Anyway, great story. I enjoyed it very much.
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This is such a clever and fun idea for a zombie poem. I chuckled more than once as I read it. I still feel weird grading a poem I liked so much with one star. This is just a witty and lighthearted silly poem. I really enjoyed it. Good luck with the contest and Happy Halloween!
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This is a great spooky seasonal poem. I really enjoyed it. There are a lot of fun lighthearted Halloween poems going around right now but this ain't one of them.
This poem is downright scary. I love the, bones and cartilage exposed to air, line. This single lines brings the fright factor up a couple notches in my opinion. Great poem, good job.
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HAHA! I love this, it is quite witty and funny. It makes me wonder if the author really has a proverbial Aunt Suzy or if this is an autobiographical experience. The thighs still raw line actually made me cringe. I thought a mention of food poisoning might follow (hehe). Great poem nonetheless.
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I love this poem. It is just so raw and real, so human. It speaks of the confusion and sacrifice our soldiers make with every moment they spend afar. I can only imagine how hard it must be to occupy a country where half the population resents your presence when all you want is to return home. Great poem, sad message.
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What an excellent poem. I love the sentiment and message of this piece. No matter how much we question and seek the answers of life and death, creation and afterlife or where we come from; we will never know the answers until we pass through the door from this life to the next. Even science can't figure out the answers. Nice, thought provoking poem. I enjoyed it very much.
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I have to be honest I have never really been a fan of Haikus before but I seem to like yours. I enjoyed both of these very much.
My favorite is the poem about home. I think you capture the essence of home magnificently in this poem. I love the line about a place to fall at day's end but I believe the first line says it all really.
I am not a dog owner but I have seen how dogs react to their masters and I believe your poem again depicts this phenomena exactly. Well done.
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I like this poem very much. It is quite thought provoking and humorous. The last line leaves the reader wondering which one use to be blue, the sky or the ocean. It is genius really. I love word play and witty turns of the phrase. This is an extremely clever and well written verse. Well done.
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Wow, what an incredibly intense and poignant poem. It is emotionally moving it is brilliant. I love this poem. The mirror structure is fascinating and the last two line stanza is so profound and touching it leaves the reader awed. Well done.
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What a beautifully dark and haunting poem. The language is lovely and eloquent. It has such a Gothic style and feel to it. I love your use of metaphors. The message is also dark and tragic. Everything about this poem just exudes melancholy. I enjoyed it very much.
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I love this poem so much. The message of it is very important and one everyone should hear. If I could just remember this message in my day to day life I would be infinitely more happy.
The quality of our lives is governed so greatly by our attitudes. If you consider every event in your life an obstacle to overcome you will become tired and overwhelmed. If however you consider every event an opportunity you will meet each one with enthusiasm and a smile. Another great poem!
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This is simply beautiful. I love everything about. The eloquence of the verse, the grace of the structure and the profundity of the questions. This is such an inspirational and awe striking piece of poetry. I really really like it. Thank you for sharing this. Bravo!
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This is so profound. I love the analogy. It does you no good to wish for something that is not possible. It is like a mute person wanting to be a singer. You must want for something that is within the realm of possibilities. Great message, awesome verse.
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This is a great little poem. I love the message. I agree completely with the sentiment. It is important to recognize that we are all the same and guilty of hypocrisy at times. I love the phrase,
turns the page, so I can hear
I just really like that turn of the phrase. Good poem, well done.
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This is such a beautiful tribute to your friend's passing. I know he is honored. I can feel the depth of your grief and sorrow through your eloquent use of language. I can tell what this friendship means to you. I am so sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
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This is another of your poems that I just love the message and sentiment. The idea that love through truth remains long after we are gone is beautiful. I think the language and metaphors you use here are awesome. I enjoyed this piece very much.
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Cool poem. I like the sentiment and message of this piece very much. It is so insightful and wise. I believe it is very appropriately titled. I love the intensity of emotion that pours from this poem. It is very uplifting and inspirational.
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What a great ballad. I really enjoyed this. I think it is because I am short story writer that I like everything even my poems to tell a story. This poem tells an interesting and entertaining story. I think the rhyme and rhythm are excellent and pacing flows very nicely. Well done.
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Wow, you really have a knack for picking subjects and writing words that resonate with me. I can tell this poem was written by a fellow parent because only a parent could express so eloquently the love I feel for my daughter. Well done.
This is simply lovely. It states truly how parents will always live vicariously through our children. Indeed they will always leave footprints on our hearts. Bravo!
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This is an incredibly intense and poignant poem. I can feel outrage and indignation. The unfairness of life screams from every line of this piece. It really is heartbreaking. I feel the frustration and yearning of the forlorn. This a powerful powerful poem. It really speaks to me. Bravo!!
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What a great poem, I really enjoyed this one. I especially like the line:
and in the art of feedback, hearing becomes the craft.
That is true in everything. Hearing is the craft not just when dealing with poetry or even writing in general but in LIFE. This is an awesome message. Awesome poem. Bravo.
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I like this poem very much. The images are lovely and the message if profound. I like the concept that it really doesn't matter what the watcher thinks about why the flower blooms it still blooms, gives its message then dies. This is a very powerful poem. The images are vivid and poignant. Bravo.
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I enjoyed this poem very much. The metaphors are just fantastic and surreal while still conveying sentiment and depth of meaning that is informative and profound. I love the lines:
I walked upon the Poet's form and hoped to feel a thunderstorm.
That is a perfect example of what a poet does. They use their techniques in the hopes of making you "feel" something amazing. Great poem, well done.
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This is a great poem. I like the images of flying paper planes and the simply joy that comes along with creating these little aerodynamic wonders. I also like the metaphorical implications of the planes compared to lives crashing and burning. I really enjoyed this poem very much. Wonderful poem, excellent job.
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I like this poem very much. It describes the transition between life and death in a very peaceful and serene "light" but at the same time this is still an eerie quality about it that I find unsettling. I think that represents the unknown aspect of death and what awaits us on the other side. I love how you explain a soul's mode of travel through streams of light and consciousness or thought. Excellent poem, well done.
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