Hossman,
Your house selling, dad-on-the-home-front story had me in stitches and tears all at the same time. Fantastic! This is a comedy sitcom in the making for sure! If it does not make it to a screenwriter's desk, it is a total loss! I loved the story telling, your detailed descriptions from the front yard to the turn of your wrist at a "Linda Blair-type angle." Bravo...I can't wait for your book!
128th Entry
Once upon a time there was a very quiet little girl with a vivid imagination. Everyday, this little girl talked to herself and encouraged herself throughout her day at home with her four sisters; at school where she absolutely spoke to everybody; and after school on her walk home. This little girl had a reputation of going about day-to-day activities seemingly oblivious to all around her. She was very happy in the world she created in her own little mind and could not figure out why people wanted to know who she was talking to and why she was so happy! One day, this happy and quiet little girl was painting with her fellow classmates on the hall walls creating a mural of all sorts of subject matters and her favorite teacher approached her to review her colorful handiwork. Mr. Arthur was delighted with her colorful rainbows, flowers, and children playing in the fields and invited her to join his art club exclusively for children with artistic abilities. He congratulated the happy and very artistic little girl on a job well done for qualifying to be a member of this exclusive art club, particularly since she was only in the 6th Grade and the club was for the upper class of 7th and 8th Graders. Because of that special in-person invitation, the whole 6th Grade knew this quiet little girl was somebody special since Mr. Arthur never invites new members to the exclusive art club verbally. He always does so with a special written invitation sent to your home. The school went totally nutty with the news and after the 7th and 8th graders heard about it, they knew this quiet little girl WAS SOMEBODY SPECIAL. After se received the invitation in the mail, this quiet little girl attended the first club meeting. Mr. Arthur welcomed all the new recruits. The little girl was so excited, but she kept as quiet as possible. Until finally, Mr. Arthur began to advise the group of the upcoming school project for the whole club to participate in creating. The club was asked to create a mural for the children's ward of the local hospital. The mural will encompass every hallway of the entire children's ward, including the main community room where the children play. The theme would be colorful rainbows, fields of flowers, butterflies, birds and little animal creatures and children frolicking about among the field of flowers. The little girl was no longer quiet, but was bubbling over with excitement. It was no wonder Mr. Arthur asked her to join the exclusive art club. Rainbows, fields of flowers and children were her specialty! But more importantly, painting a mural in a children's ward of a hospital was very special. This would help the children to heal. How delightful! This little happy little girl became a very excited and bubbly little girl for all to see! She now had a purpose to share her gift with many! What a delight!
She,
I hear you LOUD and CLEAR!
I identify and respect your poetic writing and applaud you writing expressively and unforgivingly. Writing for your very own therapeutic purposes is where we all must begin.
We are all on this writers guild for reasons closely related to yours. Writing is healing.
I only wish I had found Writing.com sooner! Be healed my writing friend and write-on! The written word will never let you down!
Dana
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