Sorry I'm not much for suicide. I do sympathize with those who leave as well as those who are left behind.I believe the Creator will serve justice on
Those who drove the lost into despair .Some of the rhymes seemed a bit jagged and the flow suffered because of it. Oh yah it wasn't much fun either.
Thanks for sharing.I'm sending some GPs to keep them in circulation and maybe cheer you up. The Swan
Pathetic But heres a few GPs to work with and pass on while you try not to drag us down to a point where we want to drink some poison or whatever works
the fastest. The Swan
I am astounded . good grief Do you really expect us to sympathize with you .You have no meaning no relevance no substance and now we are expected
to welcome this newly discovered existence into our world because she's a lesbian so don't be expecting anything natural including child Birth but thats
O K We Love you I mean that is right. Right ? Or is that all that is Left ?
I.M.O. It sounds like you don't like men very much and I suspect its mainly white men.Equality is a state of mind it is not a fact of nature.Also why would you
Include overweight people with gays and or women ? The three have nothing in common .A totally biased condemnation from people who try to group all
People who are not white males together on the same band wagon.Is by far one of the greatest social diseases in the U.S. Canada and Europe.Please
Don't think A blind person has anything in common with a person who has no legs.The only justice in this world is that which we extend to others
According to our Faith. Good luck in your endeavors The Swan
I wasn't quite ready when I started reading your poem but I was able to slow down and grasp your meanings.Somehow I felt some of them were cut short.If they
were they were made up for with a great ending. Good work thank you The Swan
Most excellent memorial to share with us. Thank you. My dad never let me meet my Grandpa but I always wanted to tell him the same things you said. thank you.
The Swan.
I was in the second grade in 1967 and I remember meeting Rick Zimmerman for the fist I mean first time while my brother and I were riding our american fly,r
wagon on one of the local hills.Excellent story, Thank you
ABSOLUTE VICTORY of the western pen.It is possible that someone,somewhere at some particlar time has told a more excitin or ntrestin story.But they,d been
fibbin, Caint get no more real,n this. thank you for excellent western read.
Absolutely wonderful. I was there I did not see anyone else there or I would have acknowledged them .OH Well perhaps it was a dream. You made it seem
so real.Thank you for reaffirming my belief that these places are real.I cant wait to return.Or for you to return. Anyway thanks,Now back to reality.welcome aboard
Thank you for sharing this story.Maybe these things are funnier then because we try so hard not to make mistakes.Maybe they are put there by our guardian angels
to remind us we are not perfect as Christ is and stave off self righteousness.Thats just an idea,We have children as do others of course in church and it is very
funny (most of the time)as long as they don't get hurt or to embarrassed to see the innocence of their actions.I once dropped the wafer in the cup.Not one of my
perfect church moments.Great story keep them coming.
A great story of interaction.All the while you are scared to death for them they 're having a great time without a care in the world.Poor Kita like the sibling who has to
ride in the back seat. Thanks for the great story.
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