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Review of 23rd JUNE  
Review by lromang
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the tragic air of ineffability of the deed done. Its unbearable undeniability: ‘what was and can no longer be’: ‘normal’. The momentous act that permeates the world of the oniric and reflects itself in reality renders its presence unescapable. Maybe some further hints, in how your intersubjective experience was changed, what is that thing-that-is-no-longer ‘normal’ could add more weight to such effect.


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Review of Metamorphose  
Review by lromang
Rated: E | (4.5)
It is refreshing, to read someone departing from the conventional dictum: association: ‘earth as a woman --- mother’, depicting it as a male. It is also interesting that, although, the waves of the sea ‘penetrating’ and ‘shaping’ the earth, could be regarded as a masculine/phallic attributions, in this work are depicted more as the sweat embrace of the constant, female, lover. This game of contraries depicts cleverley the duality male/female of nature. I’m wondering, does the earth changes the ocean too?


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