Thank you for entering in my contest and I am sorry it took so long to get the judging done and the prizes awarded. I enjoyed this story very much. The creature was creative as well as the sport. You gave good descriptions of both creature and sport. I did not see any glaring errors, although I find myself wanting to change the spelling of some words, but I have to remember that some words are spelled different in some places. Thank You for entering my contest "Invalid Item" . I hope to see you in future rounds!!
Beautiful poem. I must say that I have not seen many poems written in this way. It adds a little more something to it, such as love and sincerity. It rolls off the tongue smoothly. Thank you for sharing and I would like to read more of your writing in the future.
Wow! Beautiful poem! So emotional and filled with love. Your wife is blessed to have a man filled with so much love for her. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poetry.
You write good poetry. I still think "In a Crowded Room" is good. I like the ending line. Writing.Com is my second favorite, but all of them are good. Keep up the good work.
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Good job! You kept me hooked throughout the whole story. I only saw one typo, good. There is one thing I would like to see in this story. It is only a suggestion. When Kelly stumbles back into Nate as she sees his double, maybe Nate could explain what he is and where he came from. It would take the confusion out of wandering what he is. I was left puzzled with that question. This story reminded me of the movie “Cocoons.” Thank you for entering in my contest and I hope to see you in the next round. ~~
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They looked like the pods in those cheesy old sci-fi movies. Each pod had two compartments, one open and one closed. Each compartment of the pod was about the size of a coffin and filled with a glowing ooze that gave off the purple glow they saw. Kelly was creeped out, but couldn’t help leaning forward to get a better looked look.
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Good imagination! I like this story. There was no mistakes or glaring errors to take away from the enjoyment of the story, which is a plus. The story could stand to be a little longer, but I said short story. I guess I say a little longer because I would like to read more. Thank you for sharing. ~~
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They are sooooo cute! They are lucky. I just hope something did not happen to the mommy and I hope she comes back to the den. Since something found it, she may not come back. If you want to take care of them, you can go to a local pet shop and ask what to feed them so they don't starve till the mother gets back, if she comes back.
What a coincedence, we were just talking about bunnies the other day!
Good description of a vampire lurking in the night trying to lure you into a false sense of security. That is what I got out of it. Good job. I find vampires interesting.
Thank you for entering my contest. This was an interesting story, but there was no actual description of the beast. The character described what he/she thought the beast looked like, but the only thing was wings. There is a lot of chopped sentences that could be combined too. The spelling was good, no typo’s. It stopped abruptly at the end with out seeing the beast so I believe you could expand on this story. It is a good story, but I wanted a description of the creature. If you decide to write more on this, I would like to read it. ~
Hmmm...I can't decide if this is funny or if it is a tragedy! I think it is 50/50. The real funny thing is that I have a mother-in-law that has a small dog like that, but he is a fiest. He has snapped at me so many times that I would like to teach him a lesson in manners. He not only snaps at me, but he snaps at everyone, save my mother-in-law. I remamber one time when I was leaving her house and saying good bye to everyone. The little ankle bitter seemed like he wanted some affection to so I was going to be nice for a change and pet him. WRONG! I bent down to pet him and he jumped up and snapped at my nose. I thought he drew blood, but he didn't. I think he planed it. He was barking, wagging his little white tail, and jumping around. You never know when the little spawns will strike. A lawn mower? Really?
Lovely poem. I would love to go to a place like that. Everyone lives in harmony, a whimsical world without despair, a magical world filled with such glory...... *sigh* Good work! ~ ~
There is nothing wrong with a big woman, not that I am, but I'm not a stick figure either. The more there is, the more to love. If you really love someone it does not matter what they look like. That is what true love is. Thank you for sharing your story & keep up the good work. ~
Very creative. You did a good job! I like the way you put the poem. If I'm not mistaken, I think it looks like you shaped it like PS2. I could be wrong. There was one typo. Oh yearyea can't forget my Gameboy Other than that, you did a good job. ~
This is a very touchy subject. There are thousands of homeless people and that is sad. Some can not help it. Some are just lazy and choose not to work or what ever their problem may be. Those are the ones that give the others a hard time trying to survive in this cruel world. Some people just need a little help getting back on their feet. I try to help as many people as I can. I think, if you have an extra dollar, help out someone in need. I see lots of people and churches that help out these people. I think it is kind of ironic that I came across this. My husband just came home the other day saying that a friend of his from work had lost everything in a house fire and when I say everything, I mean everything. He barely got his wife and 4 year old son out. I have been going through my 5 year old sons clothes so I can send them to him. I even put toys that my son does not play with any more in the bag. Everything I can think of. It makes a person feel good to help out someone in need, especially if they are an innocent child. Keep up the good work by spreading the good word of help. ~
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I can hear the music playing to the lyrics in my head. I don't know how the rhythm is supposed to go, but I created my own. 
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Thank you for sharing. ~