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Review by Luca
Rated: E | (4.0)
I realize you're just ranting here, blowing off steam, but as I read through this. I can't help but think there's a great poem sitting underneath with just a little organization and separation of lines.

Emotion is power, this could become a really powerful piece, if you chose to develop it.

I can entirely relate to what you're venting. I think we've all had those moments/episodes in our lives where we've felt something similar.
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