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Review of Precious Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lazy Writer est 4/24/2008 , I want to thank you for your entry into "Invalid Item"   by A Guest Visitor ! Thank you for your wonderful entry! I have to say that each entry is making it harder and harder to judge!

I am so sorry for you lose! That is the great thing about Precious Gifts is that they can be anything and everything you want it to be. Most of time you have to lose something to realize that you had a precious gift. I am so sorry that losing someone had to happen for you to have a precious gift! Just think you will see this child again in many years to come!

Keep On Writing!



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Review of The Gift Of Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ShiShad , I want to thank you for your entry into "Invalid Item"   by A Guest Visitor ! Thank you for your wonderful entry!

I want to thank you for you entry into the contest! This is a beautiful poem that you have written! I think that it is great that he awoken from the ventilator and was there for Christmas. I am so glad that he is here now and that everything has worked out so that you didn't have to spend Christmas in the hospital any longer than needed!! I hope that every Christmas is a very special one for you every year!

Thank you very much! Keep On Writing!






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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello again! Wolf of Worlds this is the 3rd and final review that you were gifted from Dr. Shrink in my Precious Gifts Auction!

I wish that I could say that this was turning into an "Stalker" story as it seems more like an "Anthros" short story that has been written into 3 parts. You have increased the descriptions of your characters as you can picture them now as they are described. I think you need to write more so that there is alot more imagery going on as you read through this. I think that you have a very good start to a wonderful story that is just a regular short story. There is not any "dark" spots in either of the 3 chapters to be considered a "Dark Comedy." I hope that you can remember to send these to me to review again and I would like to see what you have written when you add more to these! I would love to read and review them again!

I hope to come back and read more as you add more to this and more to your port! Keep On Writing!




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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello again, Wolf of Worlds , I am here to deliver 2 more reviews that Dr. Shrink won in my Precious Gifts Auction! I will be doing this review and one more today for all the reviews to be delivered.

Chapter two has started off the same as chapter on which is a great start to an Anthros story. I think that you really need to add more to this so that you have seen Cho in the chapter already. It is slow like a short story. I think that you could add more to the imagery and descriptions to really make this look like your "Anthros'" character some more depth on how he is a stalker and that he is following her around like a true stalker does. I think that you have a great short story for each chapters right now. I think you need to add more to your story line! Keep On Writing!





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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi, Wolf of Worlds , you have been gifted 3 reviews that I will be doing, these are from Dr. Shrink as part of his auction winnings from the Precious Gifts Auction!

I think that this is a great start to your Anthros story her about your cat boy. I would not actually say he is trying to "stalk" her right now in the first chapter. I think you need to add some more descriptions and imagery into your chapters to the reader wanting to read this more. I think that you obviously have a good eye for writing with Anthros in your story line. Sometimes seems easier than writing about human characters. I think once you add more description into chapter 1 you have a awesome start to a great story! I am on to read CH.2 and CH.3 too of this! I think you have a great start!!! Keep On Writing!!!!




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for entry "Measure of Humanity" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was a sad little story about sergent Richards dying after he has been in the 5 years of the Professional Corps. I think that this is a great story telling about the tigon and lyness. I think that the tigon has learned alot from the years of Sergent Richards. I think that that he will be able to continue to lead as he gets further up into the ranks of the Professional Corps! I think his leader has been great too not that it has anything to go with the fact it is his Uncle. His dad is in the corps too! I think that it is great that he has a family in the the corps why he is in there too.






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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a great read that was interesting in finding more about Zena. Its sad to hear that she was raped when she was 11, and then had to kill the male too. I think that she does a great job of fighting back becoming stronger by taking out the owner and using his fangs to kill him and the others too. I think that Zena should always remember what she is when she goes back to kill other and what she went through. That is as far as I got because it got to gory for me. Still sick with the stomach virus....






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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think that this has some really awesome idea on which way to go like the old "choose you own adventures." I like and will be back to work on the interactive to see how far I get with this. I have to go back to reviewing more so that I can get this all done my tomorrow and finish my own story too. I think that this has helped me understand the who idea of Anthros and why there is such a demand to read and write more of these books! I hope that the one I write everyone will like just as much as yours and others who have written this style of writing! Keep On Writing.






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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think that this was a great story to your interactive to find out that there is a truth that the humans have been shrunkin to 4 ft. Not aloud to be 6ft tall. Jessy and her human went looking around to see if her dad left anything that could cause the human to grow. I think that when they found this and checked it out, Jessy may try to have Jay shrink her or even make her grow taller than what she is supposed to be. I cant wait to read more as I go through your port with the anthros. I am still trying to figure out my story as I read through yours to get the idea of what Anthros really are!






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Review of Zena's Christmas  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think that this was a neat way to have a surprise that it was Christmas! It is really sad that she lost her siblings in the avalanche that had came down that you learn about. It's amazing that she is 400 years old. I hope that she has better dreams in the future stories of hers! You have great descriptions that paint a pretty picture of the snow with the avalanche and also for Christmas day too. Zena agrees with Julia that it is Christmas no matter what! I think that the imagery is great in this!!! Keep On Writing!







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Review of Touch of Magic  
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Rated: E | (5.0)

I think that this Is a great story. I love the descriptions that you have for the imagery in this story. I think that the story line was easy to follow Throughout the story from the beginning to the end. Rena sounds like a strong character that could take this story even further places if you wrote more about her. I will be back to your port to review more later on! I think fantasy is a new genre that I will be reviewing! Keep On Writing !





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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think that this is great poem with so much imagery that you can picture it as you read it! I love how you have showed that she has the wrath how it goes from one side to another. I think that this has a great description of the words to be describe every little bit of the spirits!






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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a great poem that you have written about "Alyse's dream." I love the words going to melody. You have kept it in a well written way that you would not know that this was erotica at all! I think that the imagery and descriptions are beautiful and you can picture them perfectly!!! Keep On Writing!!!







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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I think this is a little off by having the authors note in the middle of the story. I undestand you are trying to make this into a debate between 3 women, but it just seems to to fall apart. It has a good beginning and ending but it is the middle that falls apart. Keep On Writing!!





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Review of Two Lovers  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem has some great imagery and description to paint a picture as you read through this this. I think you have a great way of describing the kiss between the young couple in Central Park. They were so into them as they steal this kiss from each other!







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Rated: E | (5.0)
You are so right the way they make it sound like the military is the best place for everyone to participate in. I think that it makes a new play ground that you learn to shoot and kill people but you also save lives too. This doesnt mean that you will be back in one piece to be able to tell your stories how you have saved that person. Keep On Writing!







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Review of A Fake Smile  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think that you are right about smile! It can be as real as you want it to be! I can be as fake you want it if you are trying to get through what ever it you are facing. I use my fake smile in real life alot more than I should. But when you just want to get through the day that is all you need to see or show whether real or not! Keep On Writing!







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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I just want to say that you sound like you have a beautiful brother that was the greatest while he was sober and was just like addict when he wasn't sober. I totally understand about losing a love one because I have mourning for my love ones more lately than usual! I think that you have described the imagery in this as you are mourning. Unfornately you brother had a side to him that others saw that was the addict side and was the bad side of him! I can experience it because I am a clean 12 year sober and addict. So I have been there with my own kids!







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Review of Amsterdam  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great chapter to excitement of having an online relationship and the nerves that goes along with the excitement, plus the pleasure of it becoming more than just the relationship. Ruairi, sounds like a Handsome guy that works and is always traveling so this is the only real way he can have a relationship for now atleast! I can wait to hear more about Myra in the next chapters soon!!

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Review of Julie  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think that this is a great poem that you have shown that our kids eventually look like us in many ways! I think you do a great job with the descriptions and imagery to picture her as you! I am glad that you wrote this poem! Keep On writing and descibing!!!



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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think that Lulu.com is a great idea too! I think eventually when I have some extra money might try out LULU.com too. I think you did a great job telling us why you chose to go into self publishing instead of going with a Big Publisher. LuLu has alot to offer as you have stated and why you chose to do this! Keep On Writing!





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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great little place that you can come and leave messsages for you! I think that you have done a great job of decorating your guestbook! I was thinking there would be alot more who would have sign in here! I think that this is just perfect!!! I cant wait to see many other things in your port as I am going through to pick one for an awardicon!!!





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Review of The Talent Pond  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think that the Talent Pond is a great place to be at!!! I think you have many choices of activities you want to do on here from Poetry to Blogging. There is always away to achieve any kind of writing ideas that you have whether it be the blogging your ideas, poetry or even to send a cnote or two! I have done the daily flash fiction challenge many times in the
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is great contest that I have entered several times! You have to really be creative to write a story with conversation that has one sentence. You also have to write it in 300 words or less...It is a great action and fiction! I love that this is daily so you can enter it literally 365 days a year!This is something that you have to make sure that you have no errors as you win 1500 gift points and sometimes there is a honorable mention too of 500 gps. This is open to register users and above!







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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I appreciate that you wanted me to do a review for you. I think that it is a good story to think about your grandma and grandpas house. I think that it has plenty of descriptions that show a picture in your mind as you read through this. I am sorry about your grandpas death and that was a horrible dream that you had. The dove was able to still take that to Santa right? I didn't see that at the end. It was an easy read all through. Keep On Writing!!



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