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Review of Tribute  
Review by Lupus
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice poem chap.

Flow work's just right and this piece fits in so well with the other work's you've posted too date.
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Review by Lupus
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice piece if a little jumbled in places. Although it doesn't really ahve an structure to it that doesn't make it bad. It makes it very thoughtful and free flowing.

Very nice piece and hope the next one is as good.
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Review by Lupus
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Okay have to say its a really good read and very gripping.

I can even imagine the amount of work and time that you must have spent researching some of the elements for this story. But i have to say it was certainly well spent. It brings a clean edge to the whole thing and the character's slide in and out of there elements with graced and ease.

Only thing to watch is a few spelling mistakes where the wrong word has slipped in.

I look forward to the next installment with glee.
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Review of Blue  
Review by Lupus
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice, love the flow of the poem and the way each line starts. It gives a great positive feel with each line.

Hope to read more of your work as well.
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Review of Waves  
Review by Lupus
Rated: E | (4.0)
Okay its a real nice piece would a good flow of word's.

One big thing that you should look to do is put some punction into it. Not all free form stop at the end of the line.

But a really nice start and look forward too more of the same.
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Review by Lupus
Rated: E | (5.0)
A really great piece of work that just flowed so well. It really portrayed Love as if was a person rather than just an emotion which i really enjoyed.

Welcome too WDC and i hope to read more of your work.
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Review of Flight of Fancy  
Review by Lupus
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice free form style poem. Some real good diction that really conveyed the joy and wonder of finding out you can fly without the need of assistance.

Flying has to be one of those things that as children we wish for and hope one day too convey, we can only imagine what primitive man thought when he saw birds in flight. At least with a simple aid we can too some degree experience the joy. But it doesn't come as close as being able to do it under your own steam.
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Review of Cabin Fever  
Review by Lupus
Rated: E | (3.5)
Really nice rhyming style to this poem which flowed very well.

My only comment is that i'd like to have seen the last verse have 3 lines and not of used a sea/see easy rhyme. But a nice piece none the less.
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Review of Help Us Help YOU!  
Review by Lupus
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great idea i plan on adding a link to my profile on a few sites i'm on.

As this is very much a digital age and people put all manner of things in there forum profiles has anyone considered doing banner icon's for people to use on forum's. They can bring in extra searches and be seen by guest and member's alike.
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Review of Unfinished  
Review by Lupus
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice starting piece, good flow to it as well.

I can see why after this she married you as well. Nothing like a man who knows how to take a few words and make them have some meaning.

Look forward to more of your stuff.
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