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Review of The Ring  
Review by mark writes
Rated: E | (5.0)
wow, even the formatting on the page looks perfect to me.
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Review by mark writes
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
nice work. good pace, believeable characters. I wish I had more time to give you a better review. I gave you a 4.0 only because every piece can use improvement.
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Review of Flying Pegasus  
Review by mark writes
Rated: E | (4.0)
good story, great idea,but for me there is more telling than showing. please don't be upset. This is only my opinion, and I am in no way qualified to edit anyone else. keep on writing.
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Review by mark writes
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love your stories. what else can i say well done again.
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Review of The Otherself  
Review by mark writes
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
great idea, short to the point,nice, but I have a hard time caring about the character, and find I'm more interested in the process of the change. Is that what you wanted? Anyway keep it up.
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Review by mark writes
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I loved it the warnings the tansion all leading to the inevitable finds things that others don't see. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Borrowed Time  
Review by mark writes
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
another amazing piece of work. love your style.
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Review of After the End.  
Review by mark writes
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great story.I would like to read more adventures like this one.
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Review of The Bishop's Hand  
Review by mark writes
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
This is a wonderful story, but for me it goes on to long. I'm no expert but you could probably find a way to cut a few words, and tighten it up alittle.
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Review by mark writes
Rated: E | (3.5)
all of it is true, but I would be willing to bet recounting one of your lessons to her. Then one of her lessons to you would grab the readers attention more. keep up the good work.
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Review by mark writes
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A wonderful twist on an ancient tale. Geat job. Thanks
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Review of Soul-Hunter  
Review by mark writes
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
great. I aways like a good vampire tale and this one is extremly well done. The goodness inherent in all children, vs the demon she could not have possibly over come on her own. The ending is perfect in that it again stays with the same good triumphing through using a traditional evil. a great read. I look forward to more of your work.
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Review of Presence  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a great story, I had to read a few parts more than once to get all of it. You must have thought this through very well. some of that does not come through. It might work better, with some of the back ground you used to develop this story. It might just be me but I realy thick this might do better if you started before this epoch battle, so people could find out more about Usuna's motal life. Still I loved the story. Thanks it was a great read.
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Review of Countdown  
Review by mark writes
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
great story,tight. Oh and thanks for the night mares this one is sure to bring.
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Review of Siren's Song  
Review by mark writes
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
outstanding, as true love tale as ever I have read. thank you thank you very much.
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Review of Louisville  
Review by mark writes
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
good story keep up the good work. its missing something but I'm not good enough to tell what it is. Sorry I couldn't be more help
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Review of The Phone Call  
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Rated: E | (2.5)
nice but how do her/his legs get damaged? Who is he? I would like to know them better. It would make it easier to care for them, or not. Nice work keep it up.
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Review of Leoparigerions  
Review by mark writes
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
loved it. R.E. Howard would be proud and you should be to.
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