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#3586666

Review of The Voodoo Doll (1st. Twisted Tales)

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Incredibly well written and great storytelling! I love to read about voodoo and magic and this was a good read together with a well paced story, full of feeling, mystery and wonder. I'll certainly read the other stories you have in your Portfolio. Which one do you recommend next? MD

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#3446774

Review of The Cave

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Magic, funny, objective. You told an interesting story in 500 words! It was a most pleasant read.
This conversation seemed so real - it was real, right? Thank you. MD

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#3445774

Review of The Eyver (HM Tickle my Funny Bone)

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

NOW THAT WAS GREAT! REALLY FUNNY! DIDN"T YOU KNOW??? I ENJOYED THIS STORY LOT. I HOPE YOU WIN! WRITE ON! MD

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#3441424

Review of Hitler Eats His Vegetables

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

It wasn't long ago that I watched on History Channel a documentary about Hitler and the effects it caused on our world. It might take centuries and even more than that for the world to transcend the negative existence of one single man. I congratulate the author for this beautiful, different and mind-blogging short story. Marlon Davids

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#3431151

Review of The Pit

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

You wrote it beautifully and told it in such a way that it brought tears to my eyes. Congratulations Chrisdaltro for your story so full of tragedy of times we should never forget. These last three lines were of intense emotion:
“It’s my turn now! Shalom, Anna.”
“Shalom, Benjamin. Will it hurt?”
“Not as much as what you already feel in your heart.
Thank you for this story. MDavids

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#3425389

Review of $5.98

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

I think I understandd your point of view. You want to show that reading and especially buying books, so cheap, is ridiculous compared to the knowledge one will acquire in thousands of pages... right?

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#3425384

Review of The Wall

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

The momentam he crosses the wall he immerges into a whole new brave world full of imaginatiom and rreality. I enjoyed this storry and it filled my heart with joy and reall emmotion. I hope he stayes there, his real realllity there is much better. My opinion

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#3424789

Review of The White House on the Hill

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Nothing can b bttr than this!

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#3424786

Review of The Curse of the Broken Mirror

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

WOW WOW WOW!

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#3424779

Review of The Offering (2nd. Cross-Genre Contest)

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

I hav not ra a story this captivating! Congratulation, author Chrisdaltro! You got my attntion. I could not stop; I want mor, mor mor and th ning was just suprb! I am imprss with th lvl of th storis in this sit. I want to ask ytou to tll m what happn to Romro. Was Marissa that bad? Congratulations!