Hi Becky that is a very good poem about depression perhaps? I too write poetry similar to yours. I honestly think you show great talent and I would encourage you to read and read and keep on writing. Well done indeed! Julieanne (Cork, Southern Ireland spelling of name!)
I thought this story was quite good. Though I wouldn't read books or stories like this. I view it as being in the same vein as the Harry Potter books and could easily imagine my daughter and nephews being very taken by it. Children all love magic and witches and magicians etc and I would encourage you to think about writing a book as I think you are very talented and show great imagination. Well done! Julieanne
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