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132 Total Reviews Given
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI TS, Thanks for the fresh breath of extraordinary Poetry over here in New York ,we need more,all you can spare and then some,and just a little bit more,please?
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Review of One Resolution  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
HI Kate,wouldn't it be nice if it spread like an epidemic of spores around the world! your HAIKU is fantastic, thank you
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Review of Stalked  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (5.0)
You sneaky little devil.You caught me totally off guard.It was great ,thank you.
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Review of Santa  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like your style.Who is your favorite haiku writer?
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Words you can't live with em and you can't live without em!! Write on andon and on.
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
In 1967 I saw that same Butterfly Flutter-by,since on LSD I did fly. Well word-ed!!Check out my port,I will revisit your port soon.
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there,line 38 should say Letting "It" show my hidden feelings.A very revealing and well done poem.
Thank you.
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Review of Sky at Night  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very very good,I especially love the mood music set in the background by the coronet. Thank you.Drop by my portsoon.
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Review of A Dark December  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
I could be wrong but I would write pierces instead of touches?
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Review of Roll  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there,great description of childhood antics.I especially loved the line Grasstreeskyhousegrass. Keep rolling and writing!OH, in line three you need an a between "of" and "lawn".
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
hello there Rasputin,I thought Rasputin was renown for his mental influence over the royal family and his predictions and his drinking and eating capacity,any way how about a signed first edition of your short storys so I can have something to read this summer!!Please visit my port!! I will visit you again soon.
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there,I love your style of writing.
Your absolutley right,so write!!
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Review of Battle Brother  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello there,how about "the Lost Future","Only Memories Left" or "Memories of the Future"anyway great poem.Please visit my port and rate and review me?Keep on writing.
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Review of You  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Tragically,beautifull and I really love the laid down hearts at the end. typo:
Capital I--line 4
Spelling that line 14
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Review of PEPPER POT SOUP  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there.Sorry about your wife,she must of been quite a lady.Thanks for stirring up my KP memories and by adding a tsp. of baked garlic to any soup or broth you enter the realm of HEAVENLY.Your friend in cooking.PLEASE VISIT MY PORT AND RATE ME?
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello there,not much room for improvement.Are you describing politicians?Write on!
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Review of So She Says  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it, short and sweet,but you will probably hear people say make it longer,strech it out,whatever.
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Review of Gas Puddle  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there,try switching line one and two.please visit my port.
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Review of Memoir  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
hello there,you need to use spell checkand keep on writing, will check back on you progress soon, Visit and rate and review my port pleaseI need more advice than you will ever need.
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Review of She Dances…  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dance on and on and on,may your solo soon be a duet!! Visit my port and rate and review me. I will return to your port soon.
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Review of Peeve  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there,Im glad your relived, but I'd still be peveed!!!
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there! Watch it in the future I love frogs!!
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Review of Don't Worry  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful thoughts,very inspiring.God bless you sister!!
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Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there,I love that "rumbling purr".You should spell it out, not just name it.Is that pur-r-r-r-r-r-r-fectly clear?I know you can do it. You have to eleminate that"THE" word from your poetical repertoire as much as possible!
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Review of Side Dished  
Review by Wordeater
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very creative.Is there going to be a sequel to Revenge OF the Yams II???
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