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Review by Alka
Rated: E | (2.5)
A scary sight of a girl feeling for the touch of light in the midst of night. How painful it must have been when she must have run in fright on the pieces of the broken glass. Thank god it was the effect of magic at the end. Good article on fear and winning.
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Review of Old Story Told  
Review by Alka
Rated: E | (3.0)
Life should never be lived in past. Dwelling over the past is just a negativeness. There is no point in repeating the same story again and again. Live life forward & inspire others to follow you.
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Review of The WISHING WELL  
Review by Alka
Rated: E | (1.5)
Pennies are hard to earn but very necessary for living. So to toil is to live. Wishes are not limitless & truth is hard to digest. The pennies when earned after hard work is perishable and hard to earn again.
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Review by Alka
Rated: E | (3.0)
good fighting spirit to inspire many. Unity is universal and with hope it can be gained easily. Lets not lose hope in times of darkness. With light of hope in mind we can pass through tough times of life
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Review by Alka
Rated: E | (3.0)
A small article on thinking of a person with a known fact that the other is definitely not aware of the same. It expresses the emotions of the male friend which he feels after remembering the words, face, hair, gestures of the female friend on one thoughtful night. It is clear that he will not call her & also that she is unaware of the feelings of this male person. He is sure he will not call her, also that she is totally indifferent to his feelings & has nothing to do with what his present status of mind is but still he is indulged in her thoughts. He is perfectly sure about his status of mind & is handling his emotions in the balanced state. It is just a fluke of thought which is not going to affect his or her life but just as the river of emotions enters the heart without knocking the doors of mind & the flow of which can never be controlled such is the state of his heart. He will surely sleep after the thought process & has expressed nicely that the best thing will be to sleep & also let her sleep because she is nothing more than a memory.
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Review of Family Tree  
Review by Alka
Rated: E | (2.5)
The above article/poem does show that generations pass by but the family relationships definitely persists. The family of both mother/father does matter for the kin. the relationships of both sides of the family together walk on to carry the future of the generations. This is a simple thought said in a net woven with words some thin some strong for the message. Could have been expressed in a better manner but it is a good attempt on the part of the writer to express the feelings of family bonds. Had not the family bonds existed today would not have been so as it is.
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