As I was reading the first chapter, I was thinking "this is dang familiar. . . like a game I've played before. . . " Then it hit me. . . It sounded like you was at least inspired greatly by the golden sun games. . . I really couldn't read past the first chapter because it sounds so much like that old game boy game. . . I realize that you did change names and stuff. . . but the story line is just so simalar!
Holy Crap. This is so amazing! It's just . . . I can't even begin to describe how much I wish I could right this well! ! ! This is just so well written and inspiring. . . I didn't see any errors, so you deffiantly took the time in this to proof read (one of my many downfalls to be honest :P )
Oh my god. I absolutely loved this. It was absolutely amazing, you captured the feelings of love into such a short thing. With me it would have taken so much more for me to describe love. Expecially for a certain person. I'm just... I'm speachless by your skills. Thank you for writing this.
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