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Review by Mitch Hall
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Brilliant! Punchy, good pace, no spelling or grammar errors and an excellent exclamation point at the end!

This little ditty, whilst meant to be humorous, will I'm sure ring true to a lot of people out there - males and females alike! I thought you did well to keep the rhyme scheme going right til the end; it flowed well and felt regular without seeming forced. The final stanza was an absolute gem, and you pulled it off beautifully.

Struggling to find any constructive criticism to be honest - I thought that it was an excellently-written and well-thought-out poem! Keep writing!

Mitch (via I.N.K.E.D.)
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Review of Truth  
Review by Mitch Hall
Rated: E | (3.0)
Nice poem! Generally good flow, and you create an effective dark atmosphere from the very beginning, which builds throughout. Just watch a couple of spelling and grammar issues (their/there/they're, apostrophe use etc.) and I'd suggest including a little more punctuation (commas, semi-colons etc) to help the poem flow even better. Great effort though, congrats :)

Mitch
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