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Review by mjdasilva
Rated: E | (1.0)
I was confused becouse there are many grammar errors such as missing commas and words, and missing details. The story is very unclear and has a bad flow to it. it's very hard to understand and read.
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Review of Snow Black  
Review by mjdasilva
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Good story you have some errors though, for example some words are misspelled.
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Review of In the Beginning  
Review by mjdasilva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great story a few grammar errors but other than that its perfect
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Review of The House  
Review by mjdasilva
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good story, a few grammer errors but other than that it great. It has suspense and greta detail. Great work!!!
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Review of In The Woods  
Review by mjdasilva
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a truly amazing story, some grammar errors, but not enough to worry about. You did a great job with the story, it had good details, and imagery, great use on personification!
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