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Review of My Little Flower  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's funny how something as simple as a little flower can take you to a place of love.
Beautifully written. I could feel your emotions.

Keep writing. You have a gift that has to be shared.

-Moonie


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Review of Golden Meadow  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
The imagery of your poem was fantastic.
I felt like I was in the meadow with the bees.
I could almost hear them.

Thank you- Moonie


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Review of Maisie's Mom Says  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like the flow of this poem.
Like you, the random things children say make me smile.
When my youngest son was little I held my breath at times because, as I used to tell people, he didn't have filters. If he thought it he said it.

-Moonie


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Review of Think  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
That's beautiful and very introspective.
I definitely could relate to your words.
Yes moving on is hard, especially from an abusive or neglectful relationship but it can be done.
I know this from experience and I admire that you see what's in front of you without excuses or denial.
You have a beautiful soul.

-Moonie


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Review of Things Change  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great story. It reminded me of my youngest grand-daughter.

It's funny how sometimes our children know more than we think they do.

Well written!!

-Moonie


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Review of The Fallen Moon  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (4.0)
Being a childe of the moon I liked the concept.

I would like to make one suggestion though.

My personal opinion is that you describe the setting in the beginning quite well. Wonderful imagery. Then you repeated the same description several times throughout the story. For me it was a bit much. I already could visualize the setting and the repetition distracted me.

Other than that suggestion it was a wonderful and imaginative work of art.

-Moonie


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Review of Christmas Thought  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem asks some very important and relevent questions.
It was well written and if I understood it, everything comes down to faith.

Blessings- Moonie


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Review of Elemental  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very good story. I hope that you'll expand what you've written so far. I'd love to read further.

The only suggestion that I can give is when you're saying that the sun was setting and then that it left the sun hanging crimson in the sky.

Instead of repeating sun twice I would suggest find another way of wording that part.

Thank you so much for the offering of your story. I look forward to more if you choose to expand.

Blessings- Moonie


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Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. The relationship between Justin and his mother was beautiful. It reminded me of me and my mother. All it took was a look and I understood her precisely.

A nice work of wordsmithing.

Blessings- Moonie
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Review of Sunset Dreams  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ken

I loved the visuals that the poem gave. It's true that some of nature rests at night only to wake up the next day. The only suggestion that I would offer is changing the word bercuese. I feel like if you have to explain to the reader what a word means for me it takes away from the flow of the words. Other than that I loved it!

Blessings- Moonie
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Review of The Moment  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)

I really liked the ending. Very good use of humor. Really good story.

Blessings- Moonie
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Review of The Only Way Out  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I found this chilling. Very well written with. The ending was a total surprise.

Blessings- Moonie
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Review of Eternal Serenade  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great descriptions. I like the way the poem flows. Beautifully done.

Blessings- Moonie
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Review of Horror Story  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! A very well written story. I love the way that you acknowledge the reader and bring he or she along with you.

I found it both chilling and truthful. It is a fate that we all must meet at some point.

Amazing!

Blessings- Moonie
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Review of Shadows  
Review by MoonChilde
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved the lesson taught. As a parent I know that you always want to protect them but you have to be willing to let them live and explore. It's truly the only way to experience and learn about life. True they will make bad decisions but that's the way they become who they were meant to be. Thank you for the story.

Blessings- Moonie
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